Fallen Through by Jemmz

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• "Fallen Through" 02-16-2010
  PB&J AU: Claire grieves the loss of Charlie. But is he really gone? Also includes what might have happened if Claire had been in S5 and Kate never took Aaron.
• Fandom: Lost
  Song: A Falling Through by Ray LaMontagne
  Vidder: Jemmz
  Length: 3:03 (25.2MB WMV)
  Program: Sony Vegas 7
• Characters/Ships: "PB&J", Claire Littleton, Charlie Pace

Comments:

• Jemmz posted on 14.11. at 09:28
  Thank you! ♥
• Im1oftheOceanic6 posted on 14.11. at 07:14
  Great editting. I liked the scenes where Claire thought she was seeing Charlie but it was really someone else.Very well done.
• Jemmz posted on 09.03. at 18:48
  Aw, thank you, Emma!! *HUGS!* Glad you liked it! ♥
• emmasholi posted on 09.03. at 18:09
  WOW! Such a sweet, but oh! so sad vid Jemma! Just fantastically done! I loved the story you had as though Claire was with them during s5, and the part with Jack. That whole audio about dropping the bomb and her "Get Charlie back" was soooo perfect! I utterly adored the end scene too :D:D So cute and convincing! Such brilliant, brilliant work hun!
• Jemmz posted on 27.02. at 19:30
  Awww, thank you so much, Morgan! ♥ And that's okay about the lateness, I was a bit behind on people's vids this month too I'm really glad you mentioned those things because they were what I was most happy about and I wanted people to notice them Really glad you liked the manips, too! They were fun to do and I'm so glad they were believable One of your faves? *blushes* Thank you! *hugs* And you so have to make another PB&J AU, I adore yours!!
  Thanks so much again ♥♥
• Lostwithoutdom posted on 27.02. at 19:12
  Sooo sorry it's taken me this long to comment. I watched it a while ago but never got a chance to comment. Anyway, this is brilliant Jemma! I loved how she kept seeing Charlie everywhere. You did such a great job sticking him in those scenes especially the one with Claire on the porch, idk how you did it but it looked awesome!
  I really liked how you had the audio after the song said something about empty promises and then Charlie promising Claire that everything is going to be fine. So sad! Claire finding the ring was really sweet. All the audio of Claire saying stuff like "don't leave me" and "come back" when she was imagining Charlie there was so well done.
  I really loved the manips towards the end with Claire thinking Miles was Charlie and then when sawyer was leaning over Claire and she thought it was Charlie too. Great job with those!
  But i think my absolute favorite parts have to be when the island moved and she got to see Charlie again!! *squee* if only that happened on the show! And of course the end! I love that you made them together at the airport having coffee! And the little maniped coffee cup for Charlie was such a great touch!
  I love PB&J AU's and this one is def one of my new fav's! You've inspired me to make another one! Now all i need is an idea as awesome as this! lol
• Jemmz posted on 26.02. at 16:30
  Kate, you never fail to give me a big smile on my face!! Seriously, thank you SO much for your lovely and detailed comment. I am super glad you liked this!! The bits you mentioned are probably my fave too I realllyyyy want some more PB&J on the show too. Even if it's just in the sideways world. Anyway, again thank you, thank you! *HUGS*
• Jinlovessunxx posted on 26.02. at 16:15
  JEMMA! ( I am soo soo sorry for the extreme lateness, *big hugs* )
  I really, really loved this, and I was so uber excited to see a new vid from you! Plus it's PB&J too so I was double excited! You make the best PB&J videos, your love of Charlie shines through the video and your love of PB&J too <3 <3 I miss Charlie so much, after watching some S6 episodes, I just want Charlie to see Claire again! This AU was such a cool twist on their relationship and how things would have worked out if Claire stayed in S5! Poor Claire aww!!! Your clip choices were absolutely amazing, and they all looked stunning with your coloring, loved it! The song was full of soft sweetness and you used the beats to the song excellently . I loved the beginning and how you started out with Charlie and Claire's memories and then him leaving, and then right on the beat Claire's eye opened and she wakes up! I was able to get sucked right into the story and follow it with captivity. OMG 0:48 to 0:51 with the black and white Charlie on "Stay" that was sooo lovely! My favorite scene would have to be the part of Claire freaking out and you had Charlie say "it's okay" but then you showed Miles saying it! WOW! Then near the ending was absolutely terrific, with the perfect audio of Jack saying what'll happen and then Charlie disapearing was sooooo haunting and emotional but perfect too. Then it was just a splendid little ending with the two of them together, meeting again <3 <3 Outstanding work Jemma, Gold and favorite on YT, the whole thing, I LOVED this and your AU vids
• Jemmz posted on 22.02. at 22:34
  Hey, Kate! Thanks, glad you liked the vid! And thanks for the concrit too
  
  Here are the lyrics to the song:
  [spoiler:5a766b0a86]
  Laid our blessings on the ground,
  The softening of sound
  Draws us closed again
  
  Stay, stay and watch the coals
  Till they cease to glow
  Like empty promises
  
  Why, Why did you go, why did you go away?
  Why, Why did you go, why did you go away?
  
  There's nothing I can say
  Nothing I can do
  To bring you back again
  
  This of life I know is true
  It's all fallen through
  And so I reach for you
  
  Why, Why did you go, why did you go away?
  Why, Why did you go, why did you go away? [/spoiler:5a766b0a86]
• thefilmchick posted on 22.02. at 21:59
  Hey Jemma!
  
  I can't really make out the lyrics--I get the feeling that might have been something useful to know. Mind sharing them, if you have them?
  
  The flashes got a little distracting somewhere between :12 and :16 and again around the one-minute mark--I think at the end of the flashy sequence. That may just be my eyes being tired at the end of the work day, but I figured I'd toss that up there.
  
  Liked the desaturated look to the clips--seemed to blend well without being jarring or cartoonish (and with a slow song, you don't want cartoonish grayscale).
  
  The blends/cutouts seemed smoothly done to me; no complaints there.
  
  Nice job, all in all!