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soapbubbles511 Expert Vidder

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Posted: Thu Feb 18, 2010 8:14 am |
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I love this... this would have been totally awesome to have actually happened on Lost....
I love the softness of all the flashback clips.... love the parts where Claire sees Charlie but then it's Miles/Sawyer.... loves Jack's speech about getting back everyone they lost being applied to PBJ... and the ending was great... beautiful job _________________
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Jemmz Council Member
Joined: 21 Oct 2006 Posts: 21154
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Posted: Thu Feb 18, 2010 9:39 am |
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Maria ~ Thanks so much! I was worried the story got a bit too much at the end and was just stuck there awkwardly but I'm really glad it worked and that you enjoyed it *hugs* 
Ais ~ Thank you, Ais! A lot of people seem disappointed about Claire's reaction. I'm just really hoping she mentions Charlie this season. It's been three years but you never know So glad you liked it, especially the end! Thanks again *hugs*
Aw, thanks again MysticWondering! 
Sarah ~ Aw, thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it!  |
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Uruviel Council Member
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 6:15 am Post subject: Fallen Through by Jemmz |
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That was such a great vid, Jemma! I like the times when Claire saw Charlie, and that ending was SO good!!! |
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Jemmz Council Member
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 6:43 am |
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Aw, thank you, Heather!  |
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thefilmchick Expert Vidder
Joined: 22 May 2006 Posts: 4030
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 9:59 pm |
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Hey Jemma!
I can't really make out the lyrics--I get the feeling that might have been something useful to know. Mind sharing them, if you have them?
The flashes got a little distracting somewhere between :12 and :16 and again around the one-minute mark--I think at the end of the flashy sequence. That may just be my eyes being tired at the end of the work day, but I figured I'd toss that up there.
Liked the desaturated look to the clips--seemed to blend well without being jarring or cartoonish (and with a slow song, you don't want cartoonish grayscale).
The blends/cutouts seemed smoothly done to me; no complaints there.
Nice job, all in all! _________________ I saw a werewolf drinking a pina colada at Trader Vic's. His hair was perfect.
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Jemmz Council Member
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 10:34 pm |
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Hey, Kate! Thanks, glad you liked the vid! And thanks for the concrit too
Here are the lyrics to the song:
[spoiler:5a766b0a86]
Laid our blessings on the ground,
The softening of sound
Draws us closed again
Stay, stay and watch the coals
Till they cease to glow
Like empty promises
Why, Why did you go, why did you go away?
Why, Why did you go, why did you go away?
There's nothing I can say
Nothing I can do
To bring you back again
This of life I know is true
It's all fallen through
And so I reach for you
Why, Why did you go, why did you go away?
Why, Why did you go, why did you go away? [/spoiler:5a766b0a86] |
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Jinlovessunxx Expert Vidder
Joined: 12 Aug 2007 Posts: 4917
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Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 4:15 pm Post subject: Fallen Through by Jemmz |
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JEMMA! ( I am soo soo sorry for the extreme lateness, *big hugs* )
I really, really loved this, and I was so uber excited to see a new vid from you! Plus it's PB&J too so I was double excited! You make the best PB&J videos, your love of Charlie shines through the video and your love of PB&J too <3 <3 I miss Charlie so much, after watching some S6 episodes, I just want Charlie to see Claire again! This AU was such a cool twist on their relationship and how things would have worked out if Claire stayed in S5! Poor Claire aww!!! Your clip choices were absolutely amazing, and they all looked stunning with your coloring, loved it! The song was full of soft sweetness and you used the beats to the song excellently . I loved the beginning and how you started out with Charlie and Claire's memories and then him leaving, and then right on the beat Claire's eye opened and she wakes up! I was able to get sucked right into the story and follow it with captivity. OMG 0:48 to 0:51 with the black and white Charlie on "Stay" that was sooo lovely! My favorite scene would have to be the part of Claire freaking out and you had Charlie say "it's okay" but then you showed Miles saying it! WOW! Then near the ending was absolutely terrific, with the perfect audio of Jack saying what'll happen and then Charlie disapearing was sooooo haunting and emotional but perfect too. Then it was just a splendid little ending with the two of them together, meeting again <3 <3 Outstanding work Jemma, Gold and favorite on YT, the whole thing, I LOVED this and your AU vids  |
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Jemmz Council Member
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Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 4:30 pm |
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Kate, you never fail to give me a big smile on my face!! Seriously, thank you SO much for your lovely and detailed comment. I am super glad you liked this!! The bits you mentioned are probably my fave too I realllyyyy want some more PB&J on the show too. Even if it's just in the sideways world. Anyway, again thank you, thank you! *HUGS* |
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Lostwithoutdom Expert Vidder

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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 7:12 pm Post subject: Fallen Through by Jemmz |
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Sooo sorry it's taken me this long to comment. I watched it a while ago but never got a chance to comment. Anyway, this is brilliant Jemma! I loved how she kept seeing Charlie everywhere. You did such a great job sticking him in those scenes especially the one with Claire on the porch, idk how you did it but it looked awesome!
I really liked how you had the audio after the song said something about empty promises and then Charlie promising Claire that everything is going to be fine. So sad! Claire finding the ring was really sweet. All the audio of Claire saying stuff like "don't leave me" and "come back" when she was imagining Charlie there was so well done.
I really loved the manips towards the end with Claire thinking Miles was Charlie and then when sawyer was leaning over Claire and she thought it was Charlie too. Great job with those!
But i think my absolute favorite parts have to be when the island moved and she got to see Charlie again!! *squee* if only that happened on the show! And of course the end! I love that you made them together at the airport having coffee! And the little maniped coffee cup for Charlie was such a great touch!
I love PB&J AU's and this one is def one of my new fav's! You've inspired me to make another one! Now all i need is an idea as awesome as this! lol  |
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Jemmz Council Member
Joined: 21 Oct 2006 Posts: 21154
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 7:30 pm |
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Awww, thank you so much, Morgan! ♥ And that's okay about the lateness, I was a bit behind on people's vids this month too I'm really glad you mentioned those things because they were what I was most happy about and I wanted people to notice them Really glad you liked the manips, too! They were fun to do and I'm so glad they were believable One of your faves? *blushes* Thank you! *hugs* And you so have to make another PB&J AU, I adore yours!!
Thanks so much again ♥♥  |
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emmasholi Council Member

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Posted: Tue Mar 9, 2010 6:09 pm Post subject: Fallen Through by Jemmz |
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WOW! Such a sweet, but oh! so sad vid Jemma! Just fantastically done! I loved the story you had as though Claire was with them during s5, and the part with Jack. That whole audio about dropping the bomb and her "Get Charlie back" was soooo perfect! I utterly adored the end scene too :D:D So cute and convincing! Such brilliant, brilliant work hun!  |
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Jemmz Council Member
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Posted: Tue Mar 9, 2010 6:48 pm |
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Aw, thank you, Emma!! *HUGS!* Glad you liked it! ♥ |
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Im1oftheOceanic6 Expert Vidder

Joined: 23 Jun 2008 Posts: 3705
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 7:14 am Post subject: Fallen Through by Jemmz |
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| Great editting. I liked the scenes where Claire thought she was seeing Charlie but it was really someone else.Very well done. |
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Jemmz Council Member
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 9:28 am |
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| Thank you! ♥ |
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