Happy Accidents (Part 1) by Brooke

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  • Brooke posted on 25.03. at 23:41
    nikkimonique wrote:
    Well if its an AU and the scene is really important to the storyline I wouldn't worry about length. Just play it by ear see how it feels with the music.


    Yeah; it's something I should have really thought about; and I am taking that into effect with the sequel; and further story/AU based.

    I found that I like more of a story; and direction.
  • nikkimonique posted on 25.03. at 21:15
    Well if its an AU and the scene is really important to the storyline I wouldn't worry about length. Just play it by ear see how it feels with the music.
  • Brooke posted on 25.03. at 20:21
    nikkimonique wrote:
    That was cool! I really liked the beginning when they met on the plane and then when it was about to crash and Jack was telling Kate that it was going to be okay. I do agree with Kat that the audio was hard to hear...also the titles were a little too fast I didn't have time to read all of them. But other then that great job! Looking fwd to part 2!!


    Thank you. I am trying to do a lot more with audio now; so this feedback is really helpful. Thanks.

    I am going to remove the titles. I don't know why I added them. I think I got onto this idea of 'making a jate trailer' and the titles just stuck.

    Your and Kat's imput is really helping me with the sequel. Thank you.

    My biggest problem with clips is I fear they run too long sometimes.


    TY!

    Seson 5 has given me some great Kate/Jack footage. LOL.
  • nikkimonique posted on 25.03. at 16:20
    That was cool! I really liked the beginning when they met on the plane and then when it was about to crash and Jack was telling Kate that it was going to be okay. I do agree with Kat that the audio was hard to hear...also the titles were a little too fast I didn't have time to read all of them. But other then that great job! Looking fwd to part 2!!
  • Brooke posted on 25.03. at 16:06
    littleton_pace wrote:
    that was quite cool! :D:D I love the idea of jack and kate crashing on the island Some of the audio was quite difficult to hear tho. And i guess my main issue was that it moved very quickly and the audio was rushed. So because of that I think the scenes lost some impact. Also, why was James on the chopper at the end if Kate left him behind? I liked the title cards, but i dont think you needed them. The story was believable enough on its own I'd like to see part 2 and what happens when they get rescued! :D oh, and the music was great , especially the suspenseful stuff


    Thank you.

    My biggest concern was the audio and the editing of the music; and I think my biggest problem is in 'Sony Vegas' it's fine. But I 'publish' it in Windows Movie Maker because if I don't do it that way; Youtube takes forever; and then it doens't work. (It's weird). WMM does weird stuff sometimes.

    James was on the chopper because he helped find them. Which I will probably go back to in the sequel.

    Thanks for the feedback.I love getting feedback. It helps me a lot.
  • littleton_pace posted on 25.03. at 10:21
    that was quite cool! :D:D I love the idea of jack and kate crashing on the island Some of the audio was quite difficult to hear tho. And i guess my main issue was that it moved very quickly and the audio was rushed. So because of that I think the scenes lost some impact. Also, why was James on the chopper at the end if Kate left him behind? I liked the title cards, but i dont think you needed them. The story was believable enough on its own I'd like to see part 2 and what happens when they get rescued! :D oh, and the music was great , especially the suspenseful stuff
  • Brooke posted on 25.03. at 05:31
    ***Automated Message***
    "Happy Accidents (Part 1)" 03-24-2009
    Story of Jate, AU
    Song: Superman Theme by John Ottoman
    Vidder: MysticWondering
    Length: 2:17 (11.4 MB WMV)

    Warning: Contains Mature Themes

    Link(s): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RMT9WspDsKs
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RMT9WspDsKs

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