Take Me Home (Jate AU) by Brooke

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  • Brooke posted on 04.03. at 03:31
    3328 wrote:
    Oooooh that was awesome. I totally got the story without reading any of the comments below cause all the manips were so clever. I liked the way you used Sawyer. I don't think I've ever seen an AU where he's been a doctor before, so that was really original. All the manips were awesome aswell. I found the changing music a little distracting though.
    Oooh, one more thing - I liked the bits where it went backwards. Twas a cool idea.


    Thank you; it means a lot. I am glad you understood the plot. I was like "I want Sawyer to be the guy who shoots Jack; but why?!" Then I just came to me to put him in the role of Christian. I like changing music for some reason;but I need to figure out how to be more suttle about it and not so abrupt. I had a lot of fun making it.
  • Brooke posted on 04.03. at 03:27
    186 wrote:
    I really enjoyed this, I like how you did everything, and good choice of music. I really liked how you did the clips going backwards and how you used sawyer in it. you did a great job!


    Thank you. I had a blast making it. I wanted to do something with more of a story/plot to it.
  • Wildcat posted on 04.03. at 01:19
    I really enjoyed this, I like how you did everything, and good choice of music. I really liked how you did the clips going backwards and how you used sawyer in it. you did a great job!
  • Captain Freya posted on 03.03. at 23:12
    Oooooh that was awesome. I totally got the story without reading any of the comments below cause all the manips were so clever. I liked the way you used Sawyer. I don't think I've ever seen an AU where he's been a doctor before, so that was really original. All the manips were awesome aswell. I found the changing music a little distracting though.
    Oooh, one more thing - I liked the bits where it went backwards. Twas a cool idea.
  • Brooke posted on 03.03. at 20:25
    nikkimonique wrote:
    MysticWondering wrote:
    littleton_pace wrote:
    That was pretty cool! although to be honest; I didn't understand the story very well. I wasn't sure what Sawyer was doing in there; was he a doctor? And did he shoot Jack or did Jack shoot himself? That scene wasn't exactly clear to me. I did love the ending and the Kate parts with Aaron were sweet :D Did they have two kids or just Aaron? And the Jate scene at the hospital was very nicely done; my fave part :D


    Yeah; Sawyer was a doctor. Unfortunately it was hard to convey that. Yeah they only had the one child; Aaron. And Sawyer shot Jack because he ratted him out to the other doctors. Thank you.



    ahhhh!!! I was confused too but now I get it...and I thought they had two kids as well. B/c she had the little baby when she answered the phone and then Aaron. But I really liked the sequence of this and the reverse scenes and all the dialogue was just great!! I really liked when she called him about Taco night and I agree with Kat that the part in the hospital was my fav too!



    LOL. I wish I could have conveyed more about Sawyer's role.

    Also; with the baby. I tried to look for stuff with Matthew and a baby; but couldn't find anything. So I used Aaron because there was a lot of Kate/Aaron and one Jack/Aaron.

    Thanks for your comments.
  • eloramoon posted on 03.03. at 18:09
    I thought a lot of your manips and audio were pretty well done! It was an interesting story idea, too. Overall, I think this was a really good AU vid! Very nice! Keep up the awesome work!!!
  • nikkimonique posted on 03.03. at 13:16
    MysticWondering wrote:
    littleton_pace wrote:
    That was pretty cool! although to be honest; I didn't understand the story very well. I wasn't sure what Sawyer was doing in there; was he a doctor? And did he shoot Jack or did Jack shoot himself? That scene wasn't exactly clear to me. I did love the ending and the Kate parts with Aaron were sweet :D Did they have two kids or just Aaron? And the Jate scene at the hospital was very nicely done; my fave part :D


    Yeah; Sawyer was a doctor. Unfortunately it was hard to convey that. Yeah they only had the one child; Aaron. And Sawyer shot Jack because he ratted him out to the other doctors. Thank you.



    ahhhh!!! I was confused too but now I get it...and I thought they had two kids as well. B/c she had the little baby when she answered the phone and then Aaron. But I really liked the sequence of this and the reverse scenes and all the dialogue was just great!! I really liked when she called him about Taco night and I agree with Kat that the part in the hospital was my fav too!
  • Brooke posted on 03.03. at 07:59
    littleton_pace wrote:
    That was pretty cool! although to be honest; I didn't understand the story very well. I wasn't sure what Sawyer was doing in there; was he a doctor? And did he shoot Jack or did Jack shoot himself? That scene wasn't exactly clear to me. I did love the ending and the Kate parts with Aaron were sweet :D Did they have two kids or just Aaron? And the Jate scene at the hospital was very nicely done; my fave part :D


    Yeah; Sawyer was a doctor. Unfortunately it was hard to convey that. Yeah they only had the one child; Aaron. And Sawyer shot Jack because he ratted him out to the other doctors. Thank you.
  • littleton_pace posted on 03.03. at 07:55
    That was pretty cool! although to be honest; I didn't understand the story very well. I wasn't sure what Sawyer was doing in there; was he a doctor? And did he shoot Jack or did Jack shoot himself? That scene wasn't exactly clear to me. I did love the ending and the Kate parts with Aaron were sweet :D Did they have two kids or just Aaron? And the Jate scene at the hospital was very nicely done; my fave part :D
  • Brooke posted on 03.03. at 07:53
    ***Automated Message***
    "Take Me Home (Jate AU)" 03-02-2009
    Jate AU; Description at Youtube.
    Song: Ghosts by Clint Mansell
    Vidder: MysticWondering
    Length: 2:40 (13.9MB WMV )

    Warning: Contains Mature Themes

    Link(s): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Iesmzqv9Sg
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Iesmzqv9Sg

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