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"LOST Greatest Hits - A Minor Incident" 04-05-2010
This was supposed to be a Greatest Hits episodic video, but then I started adding more and more clips from other episodes. So I guess its more... a Greatest Hits centric vid? Im not sure. Anyway it focusses on Charlies last moments and his goodbye to t
Song: A Minor Incident by Badly Drawn Boy
Vidder: PBJNewbie
Length: 3:14 (37.8MB m4v)

Link(s): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UKQWDTrmBHw
http://bamvidvault.ning.com/video/lost-a-minor-incident

thefilmchick · Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 10:08 pm Post subject:

Good job not going effects-crazy and completely losing the focus of your story.

In the first 20 seconds, good synch to the guitar chords. I wasn't as keen on the quick pull-ins, but they were timed well.

A couple of too dark clips throughout, usually at night: You may want to try brightening anything like that on its own track, in order to keep it organized.

Watch out for talking clips every now and again, but none were so drastic that they totally detracted.

I would have liked a bit of different coloring at the bridge at 1:45ish, in order to set it apart. The quotes were well-used and not too loud or too soft.

More well-done guitar synchs around 2:30, too.

Good job!
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PBJNewbie

@thefilmchick Thanks so much for taking the time to write such a long and helpful comment. I agree with most of the things you said - especially about that dark clips stuff, I didn't notice how bad they looked until I rendered the video... ^^'

blackwolf1480

That was lovely to watch. I loved the beat use. It all fit perfectly, especially the harmonica parts. I think my favorite part was from 2.15 to 2.19. You did Charlie justice.

littleton_pace · Posted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 7:01 am Post subject:

ooh; great song choice!!! perfect lyric interpretation of a perfect Charlie song

Definitely suits the way he feels about claire and aaron, and Hurley as well

I loved those parts

the dialogue was tough to hear in some places, but im dealing with dodgy headphones so it might be from my end

beautiful job

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PBJNewbie

@blackwolf1480 Aw, thanks so much for such an amazing comment!

PBJNewbie

@littleton_pace Thank you SO much, it really means a lot to me that YOU liked this! ='] Yeah, the voiceovers are not always that clear because otherwise the background music would cover the song... Thanks again!

Jemmz · Last edited by Jemmz on Fri Apr 09, 2010 7:05 pm; edited 1 time in total

Oh WOW, that was BEAUTIFUL! Wonderful beat use and use of the lyrics! I loved this! I also love the fast pace at the end, really went with the music and the emotion of Charlie's death. Wonderful job!

PBJNewbie

@Jemmz Aw, wow, thank you so much!

Uruviel

That was great! Nice use of the song for Charlie.

emmasholi

This was brilliant! This song was perfect for Charlie and your clip choices were spot on!! I really liked how you used the zooms with the music, that looked great! Really enjoyed this one, awesome work!