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PBJNewbie Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 10:08 pm Post subject: |
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Good job not going effects-crazy and completely losing the focus of your story.
In the first 20 seconds, good synch to the guitar chords. I wasn't as keen on the quick pull-ins, but they were timed well.
A couple of too dark clips throughout, usually at night: You may want to try brightening anything like that on its own track, in order to keep it organized.
Watch out for talking clips every now and again, but none were so drastic that they totally detracted.
I would have liked a bit of different coloring at the bridge at 1:45ish, in order to set it apart. The quotes were well-used and not too loud or too soft.
More well-done guitar synchs around 2:30, too.
Good job! _________________ I saw a werewolf drinking a pina colada at Trader Vic's. His hair was perfect.
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PBJNewbie Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 5:41 pm Post subject: LOST Greatest Hits - A Minor Incident by PBJNewbie |
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@thefilmchick Thanks so much for taking the time to write such a long and helpful comment. I agree with most of the things you said - especially about that dark clips stuff, I didn't notice how bad they looked until I rendered the video... ^^' |
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 6:15 pm Post subject: LOST Greatest Hits - A Minor Incident by PBJNewbie |
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That was lovely to watch. I loved the beat use. It all fit perfectly, especially the harmonica parts. I think my favorite part was from 2.15 to 2.19. You did Charlie justice. ![](images/smiles/icon_mrgreen.gif) |
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ooh; great song choice!!! perfect lyric interpretation of a perfect Charlie song ![](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) Definitely suits the way he feels about claire and aaron, and Hurley as well ![](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) I loved those parts the dialogue was tough to hear in some places, but im dealing with dodgy headphones so it might be from my end ![](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) beautiful job ![](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) _________________
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PBJNewbie Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 12:34 pm Post subject: LOST Greatest Hits - A Minor Incident by PBJNewbie |
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@blackwolf1480 Aw, thanks so much for such an amazing comment! |
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Posted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 12:37 pm Post subject: LOST Greatest Hits - A Minor Incident by PBJNewbie |
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@littleton_pace Thank you SO much, it really means a lot to me that YOU liked this! ='] Yeah, the voiceovers are not always that clear because otherwise the background music would cover the song... Thanks again! |
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Posted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 10:34 am Post subject: LOST Greatest Hits - A Minor Incident by PBJNewbie |
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Oh WOW, that was BEAUTIFUL! Wonderful beat use and use of the lyrics! I loved this! I also love the fast pace at the end, really went with the music and the emotion of Charlie's death. Wonderful job!
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PBJNewbie Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 6:51 pm Post subject: LOST Greatest Hits - A Minor Incident by PBJNewbie |
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@Jemmz Aw, wow, thank you so much! ![](images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif) |
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 5:26 am Post subject: LOST Greatest Hits - A Minor Incident by PBJNewbie |
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That was great! Nice use of the song for Charlie. ![](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) |
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 9:03 pm Post subject: LOST Greatest Hits - A Minor Incident by PBJNewbie |
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This was brilliant! This song was perfect for Charlie and your clip choices were spot on!! I really liked how you used the zooms with the music, that looked great! Really enjoyed this one, awesome work! ![](images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif) |
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