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tjmack1986 Expert Vidder
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PsychoCynic Expert Vidder
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2012 9:41 pm Post subject: |
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Aww, this was so sweet! I loved your use of the voiceovers and the lyrical interpretation when you didn't include voiceover ("your mouth is poised" - is that the right lyric?). Your beat use was really subtle and wonderful and in line with the music.
The only thing was that I felt this ended too quickly. I saw a mini-buildup earlier and I was expecting some sort of climax, but never got one. The conversation you included at the end was very important to their relationship, but I'm not sure if I would've ended it like that.
I hope you don't take the criticism too harshly. Overall I really did like the vid! Nice job on it! ![](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) _________________
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tjmack1986 Expert Vidder
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Thank you so much! Nope, I love criticism, it helps me get better! _________________
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 5:20 am Post subject: Shawn&Juliet; I Dont Love You, But I Always Will by tjma |
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Great vid, I loved the coloring and the audio. I don't watch this show; but I know it's one I should I thought the song went perfect here. |
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tjmack1986 Expert Vidder
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 5:39 am Post subject: |
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*gasps again* brooke, you're killing me! Psych is such an awesome show. LOL!
Thanks again! <3 _________________
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2012 8:18 am Post subject: Shawn&Juliet; I Dont Love You, But I Always Will by tjma |
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So sweet, Tammy! Great job! ![](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) |
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tjmack1986 Expert Vidder
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2012 10:11 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks Julia! _________________
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