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Freckles08 Advanced Vidder
Joined: 22 May 2008 Posts: 100 Location: London
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Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 7:46 am Post subject: "When Youre Gone AU" by Freckles08 |
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"When Youre Gone AU" 02-22-2009
Jack breaks up with Kate and she doesnt deal with it well. She turns to friends Juliet for support but is shocked when she finds out who Jack left her for contains scenes of self harm
Song: When Youre Gone by Avril Lavigne
Vidder: Freckles08
Length: 4.22 (77.2mb wmv)
Warning: Contains Mature Themes
Link(s): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y7MYivI1DqQ
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Uruviel Council Member
Joined: 31 Mar 2005 Posts: 21848 Location: Tennessee
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Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 8:04 am Post subject: |
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Good vid! Nice AU scenes and cool storyline. _________________ Heather |
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nikkimonique Expert Vidder
Joined: 27 Jul 2007 Posts: 30477 Location: With Anna Torv... somewhere ;)
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Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:58 pm Post subject: |
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Oh no did Kate die at the end? I couldn't tell. I really liked your storyline. It was so heartbreaking...especially the scenes of Kate cutting her self and when she was telling Jack that they were going to take the baby away.... Enjoyed it lots! _________________
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khaleesi Expert Vidder
Joined: 24 Aug 2005 Posts: 3090 Location: the time vortex
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 3:53 am Post subject: When Youre Gone AU by Freckles08 |
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That was super sad!! Really well done on the AU scenes, especially the cutting parts, it really looked convincing!!
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-Kait |
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littleton_pace Council Member
Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 55699 Location: the nest
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Posted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 5:02 am Post subject: When Youre Gone AU by Freckles08 |
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Aww, that was really sad The Thirteen scenes worked really well I loved the storyline with Juliet betraying Kate by being with Jack ;] and the storyline with the bub was sad too Watch the audio volumes, they're tricky as hell, so it doesnt chop so suddenly But you're storytelling is really clever; definitely keep it up |
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