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FrecklesPhoenix Expert Vidder
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nikkimonique Expert Vidder
Joined: 27 Jul 2007 Posts: 30477 Location: With Anna Torv... somewhere ;)
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 12:50 am Post subject: |
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Yay! First to comment!
I really really enjoyed this!! I loved all your AU scenes and thought they were very well done. I really like how you started it out. I really got the feeling that Kate was waiting for execution...loved the titles with the dates and the flashback audio! I think that helped with the dark creepiness of it! So now for my favorite parts of the vid: Kate's smile after Sawyer tells her his name. (It was just so cute and natural looking.) the "You just look so damn cute scene" after Sawyer sees Kate in her dress.( that was my very favorite scene in your video! Just made me go awwww) And then I got chills at the scene when Sawyer gets shot and it cuts to black for a moment and then Kate's tortured face in slow-mo....OMG that was so effective with the music and everything!! Bravo!! I thought the ending with the pregnancy was an awesome way to end it too! Fab work! Good luck in the contest!! _________________
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ezza0ezza Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 8:02 am Post subject: Helpless Estate by FrecklesPhoenix |
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that was amazing! I absolutely loved the ending, it was flawless! |
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Joon Expert Vidder
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 10:29 am Post subject: |
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That was soo sad, Freckles. But I liked the storyline - all the AU scenes were great! Great job and good luck in the contest! _________________
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fabri086 Expert Vidder
Joined: 10 Nov 2007 Posts: 982 Location: Italy \ Sayid's tent
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 10:36 am Post subject: |
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OMG amazing! great storyline, it was flawless. love all the AU scenes and the audio choices, especially when they first meet and the bed scene, after they get married.. that was my absolute fav scene awesome ending, too, it was soooo sad, but this is what the contest asked so.. great job, hun! congrats! and good luck in the competition
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buffyfan145 Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 2:32 pm Post subject: Helpless Estate by FrecklesPhoenix |
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Nicole, that was really well done!!! GREAT job with this and the AU scenes were SO well done!!! The storyline was so sad!!! GREAT job and Good Luck in the Contest!!! |
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FrecklesPhoenix Expert Vidder
Joined: 05 Nov 2006 Posts: 1387 Location: In Sawyer's arms...
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 3:08 pm Post subject: |
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Nikki- Thank you!!! I'm so glad you liked it! I was really hoping you would, because you're like, the queen of AUs... and I made it for you (and Aislynn and Sassy). I like those scenes too, and I'm really pleased about what you said about the ending, because I was afraid people might not go for it. I'm actually thinking about making a sequel to this... maybe something about her trying to cope with their son without Sawyer...
ezza0ezza- Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!
Joon- Thank you! I'm glad that a Skater as cool as you liked it. Sorry it was so sad... that's what the contest asked for.
fabri086- I'm really glad you said something about the bed scene. That was really hard to do. Trying to sync up that conversation she had with Kevin to the one she had with Sawyer gave me a lot of trouble.
buffyfan145- I'm glad you liked it! And thank you for the compliment. _________________ Avi by Debbie Banner by CDS1...
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Naphie Advanced Vidder
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I loved the start!! Very well done!! And so sad ending! But it was great!!Congrats!! _________________
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Jinlovessunxx Expert Vidder
Joined: 12 Aug 2007 Posts: 4917 Location: Pennsylvania, USA
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 8:24 pm Post subject: |
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This was sooooo awesome! Wow, from the beginning with Sawyer and Kate drinking together to the ending..soo soo sad..aww. You did extremely well with your storyline and the song was so cool. Good luck in the contest _________________ Jin is lost in Sunlation forever..
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nikkimonique Expert Vidder
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Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 8:52 pm Post subject: |
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Quote: | I'm actually thinking about making a sequel to this... maybe something about her trying to cope with their son without Sawyer... |
Awesome! I'd love to see a sequel...I'm going to make a sequel to my contest vid too. It will be done in a couple of weeks hopefully. _________________
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SassyLostie2 Expert Vidder
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Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 11:05 pm Post subject: |
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Ooh, cool job, Nicole! Very interesting plot idea, so angsty! I kind of did this with a fanfic once, and I've always liked the "Kate in jail and on death row while Sawyer watches helplessly from afar" idea a lot.
Hope you make more Lost vids soon. _________________
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Aislynn Council Member
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Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 12:46 am Post subject: Helpless Estate by FrecklesPhoenix |
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Great job! So fabulously angsty yet still full of all that Skatey goodness! *fangirl sigh* I enjoyed it so much, even the (contest dictated ) sad ending. *sob* And thank you so much for the dedication! *hugs* Very much appreciate! Again, great job; I loved it! |
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littleton_pace Council Member
Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 55699 Location: the nest
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Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 12:31 pm Post subject: Helpless Estate by FrecklesPhoenix |
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wow i loved this!!! AU's are the best I really loved how you told their story in flashbacks and paired it with present day stuff ;P I loved all the audio and the end was so sad the only thing i didn't get was i thought kate was supposed to be executed...and then she's out of jail pregnant at the end? Or is that still in jail? either way; gold from me |
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FrecklesPhoenix Expert Vidder
Joined: 05 Nov 2006 Posts: 1387 Location: In Sawyer's arms...
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Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 5:41 pm Post subject: |
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Yay!! CP!!! Thank you so much!
Sassy- Yeah, it was pretty intense... definitely the most serious vid I've ever done. I would love to read that fanfic by the way...
Aislynn- Aww! I'm so glad you finally got to watch it! And you enjoyed it too! I feel really bad about how depressing it was, because I love Skate so much, but that's why I put all the sweet Skateness in the beginning... to like, counteract the sorrow at the end. Thanks for loving it and you're absolutely welcome for the dedication.
Kat- AU's are pretty sweet. For me they're right up there with comedy... And about that ending... well, basically it was like he gave up his life for hers, like, he took her punishment/sentence... and then she was released. This was obviously a very nonsensical/corrupt prison she was being held at ( ) so she was let out after he died in her place and found that she was pregnant with his kid from their prison woopie. (Yes, I called Skex Prison Woopie.) Thanks for the gold!
Thanks for all the wonderful comments! Much love! _________________ Avi by Debbie Banner by CDS1...
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Uruviel Council Member
Joined: 31 Mar 2005 Posts: 21848 Location: Tennessee
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Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 6:34 am Post subject: Helpless Estate by FrecklesPhoenix |
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Nice AU! Good storyline and use of the audio. |
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