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		swizzgirl Intermediate Vidder
  
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		nikkimonique Expert Vidder
  
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				awww this was very Sweet! I love Skate! I especially like the part "Stop your crying it will be alright" I hope you don't mind me giving you a little constructive criticism. I think some of your scenes ran a little long. Like the kissing scene in the cage I would have cut and a few others. It would just make it flow a little better. But keep at it! Your vids are good!    _________________
  
 
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