View previous topic :: View next topic |
Author |
Message |
swizzgirl Intermediate Vidder
![](http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/3866/avatar80pixelrd5.jpg)
Joined: 17 Apr 2008 Posts: 20
|
|
Back to top |
|
![](templates/subSilver/images/spacer.gif) |
nikkimonique Expert Vidder
![](http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s167/nikkimonique26/fringeseason1cat2_zps051f63f7.png)
Joined: 27 Jul 2007 Posts: 30477 Location: With Anna Torv... somewhere ;)
|
Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 2:46 pm Post subject: |
|
|
awww this was very Sweet! I love Skate! I especially like the part "Stop your crying it will be alright" I hope you don't mind me giving you a little constructive criticism. I think some of your scenes ran a little long. Like the kissing scene in the cage I would have cut and a few others. It would just make it flow a little better. But keep at it! Your vids are good! ![](images/smiles/icon_wink.gif) _________________
![](http://i1223.photobucket.com/albums/dd511/LovesecretsLVI/IMG_8526.jpg) |
|
Back to top |
|
![](templates/subSilver/images/spacer.gif) |
|