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 Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 11:01 pm Post subject: "Who Knew -Shayid" by JJWill |
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"Who Knew -Shayid" 12-28-2006
A Shannon and Sayid video about her death from Sayids POV, because i thought this song fitted so well with them.
Song: Who Knew by Pink
Vidder: JJWill
Length: 3:28 (17.2MB WMV)
Link(s): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4lWHLCu41yY
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rbexter93
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I loved how you meant to interprate the song although I'm not sure your meaning was clear all the way through.
You showed clear beats and I liked where he had her in his arms when it said "you'd be long gone.".
It looked good when Sayid was looking at her grave and the bittersweet relationship between them.
I think you could improve on your scene quality, although it mightn't be your fault every program has something to clean scenes up, PM me if you need help with that.
You also used repetive scenes, try to use each scene once where it makes the most impact. I can see you have potential. If you ever need help with your videos/betas pm me.
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