Make Me Better (charlie/ana) - part 1 - for Amy by littleton_pace

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Make Me Better (charlie/ana) - part 1 - for Amy
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  • "Make Me Better (charlie/ana) - part 1 - for Amy" 11-29-2010
    Ana, pregnant before the plane crashed, bonds with Charlie on the island; a bond that continues well after they are rescued. A wishlist gift for Amy xox.
  • Fandom: Lost
    Length: 3:39 (29.1MB WMV)
    Program: Sony Vegas 7
  • Characters/Ships: "Chana", "PB&J"

    Vid contains mature themes: Language

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  • nikkimonique posted on 04.12. at 19:47
    3986 wrote:
    Lovely AU story!!! I'm excited for part 2


    part 2 is up on my profile page.
    http://lostvideo.net/viewvid.php?vidid=8236
  • blackwolf1480 posted on 04.12. at 19:28
     Lovely AU story!!! I'm excited for part 2
  • thefilmchick posted on 04.12. at 19:06
     First time really watching AU stuff, but Nikki'd suggested I watch the series, so hello!

    The facial shots and the mountains behind them were well done, and the intro 25secs was an effective way to start the video. The speaking didn't sync up to the words entirely at one point ('I was pregnant on the plane'). I liked Charlie playing the piano towards the end when the piano roll kicked in.

    I thought the story was fairly easy to follow, although a little more space devoted to Claire and Charlie in light of Ana-Lucia might have been worth it: I deliberately did not read the description to see if I could follow the story alone, and was a bit lost for a second around 3min in when Claire was taking Ana's place. I could have missed something there, but, if so, then whatever I missed might be emphasized.

    On to Part 2!
  • ciaimpala posted on 02.12. at 21:39
     Amazing job hon! You do such an incredible job with AUs, you tell your storyline so perfectly with both audio and video.
  • Jemmz posted on 01.12. at 14:06
     Eeeee! I can't believe you made a Chana vid, Kat!!! This is your best, EVER! *is not biased at all* This was so stunning!!! I really really loved the manips! It's always a bit difficult to make Chana vids because they hardly have ANY scenes together, but I guess that's the fun! I really liked the birth scene, I thought that "Breed" clip might make a good manip for that. You used the non-Lost clips SO well And I really liked the manip of Charlie coming home and seeing "Megan" crying and Ana just drinking. The manips with Claire and Ana were also so good! I can't wait for part two!!! Amazing job!! :D
  • littleton_pace posted on 01.12. at 06:45
     Thanks heather!! xx
  • Uruviel posted on 01.12. at 06:43
     Great AU, Kat! I like the scenes towards the end with Claire.
  • nikkimonique posted on 01.12. at 00:38
     Stay tuned for part two Amy.
  • Wickedgal posted on 01.12. at 00:10
     Well it was definitely a surprise! Combining my fave AU pairing with one of my fave vidders was just an amazing surprise Thank you
  • littleton_pace posted on 30.11. at 23:50
     Yay! glad you liked it Amy! I totally wanted to surprise you with it xoxox
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