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		| tjmack1986 Expert Vidder
 
  
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		| blackwolf1480 Intermediate Vidder
 
  
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				|  Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 10:43 pm    Post subject: Charlie&Claire||Everything by tjmack1986 |   |  
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				| Awwww, this was adorable, Tammy. PB&J for ever  |  | 
	
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		| tjmack1986 Expert Vidder
 
  
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				|  Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 11:48 pm    Post subject: |   |  
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		| thefilmchick Expert Vidder
 
  
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				|  Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 7:06 pm    Post subject: |   |  
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				| Nice buildup to the guitars kicking in at 1:50ish. Good pace of clips, and good color on the clips themselves--it felt connected thanks to that. 
 The texture distracted me; I think had it been big enough to cover the whole video, or a bit less opaque over the video (more of a sheen rather than what look like scratches on the video), it'd have been a bit more effective. Maybe it looks more effective in HD, but campus wireless prevents that--let me know if you think it would, though, and I'll give it a go on Monday.
 
 A couple of talky clips and one credit clip, too (most at the beginning.)
 
 Solid job.
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		| tjmack1986 Expert Vidder
 
  
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				|  Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 8:51 pm    Post subject: |   |  
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				| thanks! To me it the texture looks better in HD, but that's just my opinion. Yeah, I didn't catch the talky clips until I'd already uploaded it to youtube. _________________
 
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		| Uruviel Council Member
 
 
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				|  Posted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 7:28 am    Post subject: Charlie&Claire||Everything by tjmack1986 |   |  
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				| Sweet PB&J vid, Tammy!  |  | 
	
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		| tjmack1986 Expert Vidder
 
  
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				|  Posted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 4:11 pm    Post subject: |   |  
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				| thanks heather! _________________
 
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		| Jinlovessunxx Expert Vidder
 
  
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				|  Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 3:57 pm    Post subject: Charlie&Claire||Everything by tjmack1986 |   |  
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				| Aw, how sweet! Lovely song, it just tugs at your heart strings! I thought your PB&J clip choices were perfect and Charlie's love for Claire was just glowing in this video    Beautiful beginning with the fade offs, it added a nice emotional effect. I also adored the ending with the zoom in clip of Charlie writing "the night I met you"  Lovely job!    |  | 
	
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		| tjmack1986 Expert Vidder
 
  
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				|  Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 4:05 pm    Post subject: |   |  
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				| thanks Kate! _________________
 
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		| Jemmz Council Member
 
 
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				|  Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 10:13 pm    Post subject: Charlie&Claire||Everything by tjmack1986 |   |  
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				| Beautiful job, Tammy  This is such a PB&J song! Some awesome beat use there, though it seemed to get a little out of time towards the end (not sure if that's youtube messing things up again or what, but it's not that much of a big problem anyway). I also didn't like the texture you used, I dislike when they go across the screen like that - like Kate (thefilmchick) said, it is kind of distracting. You could have left it out and it would've looked fine. Anyway though, this was really sweet and I enjoyed it, lovely work  |  | 
	
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				|  Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 10:05 pm    Post subject: |   |  
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				| Thanks Jemma. I've noticed that I dislike the texture now too. It looked kinda cool at first, but it really takes away from the video. _________________
 
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