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Belle MacFarlane

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"I'm Sorry :: Carrie Copeland (fanfic/rp trailer)" 02-15-2010
Trailer for season 6 of this fanfic/rp thingymabob

focused on my OC Carrie (Mila Kunis)

Song: Doomsday by Doctor Who
Vidder: Belle MacFarlane
Length: 1:45 (9.11MB WMV)

Link(s): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pG8dTKpldoA
http://www.mediafire.com/?kfy0ymmcjtw

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littleton_pace · Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:10 pm Post subject:

oooh; very cool!!

I love Carrie already

awesome way to show her story, being abandoned and depending on. she had a baby??? that was a detail you never revealed during our OC spam chats!! great use of Mila footage; that island stuff was so fitting

and her kickass-ery

loved her saying 'i'm sorry' too

Can we get a link to read the fic? I'd really like to see how carrie ties in with richard's life

well done Millie!
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Belle MacFarlane

it's on a MEmerson fan board so you have to sign up, but it's free

nyah: http://www.michaelemerson.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=fanfic&action=display&thread=2390 but Carrie doesn't come in 'til page, um.... 9. it's rather long

although, you can read just Carrie's s6 stuff here: http://docs.google.com/leaf?id=0B9gGMlQc0nlLNzdhNTQzYWItZTJjOS00ZTAzLWE2NjktNDZkNjE2ZDcwNDRi&hl=en

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HobbitRockGod

Really good job, Millie!

I really liked all the voiceovers you used. Carrie seems very cool!

thefilmchick · Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 8:47 pm Post subject:

Reviewing by request!

Please note: I don't do OC fiction, so it's entirely lost on me as a subgenre of fanfic. Reviewing with blinders on to that.

Things seem to mesh well, though. I didn't get any sort of 'Wait, this isn't from Lost!' points, so well-done with the blend.

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Quibbles; take or leave:

The pings on 'What would you etc.' are well-done, but the title feels a bit too long to me. When it got to '... the man you love,' I was kind of waiting for the end. In future, I'd suggest limiting the pingy effect to five or six words at most; otherwise, it gets old.

Font quibble: Papyrus. I can recognize it instantly and have an instinctive dislike of it. That's my graphic design background/me being picky.

Keep your phrases the same: 'She was abandoned; she came back;' etc. Most of them are the same, but the first two aren't.

Visible credits with Des' 'Look down the barrel of the gun' and Danielle's 'Run, hide, or die' speech.
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Brooke · Expert Vidder Joined: 01 Jul 2008 Posts: 24129

I thought the text, 'What would you do to be with the one you love?' Especially broken up word for word. I thought it was interesting, great manips of this character to the Island. It would be really interesting in future vids to see how she ties into Richard.

Jemmz

That was really cool, Millie! The Doctor Who music is beautiful!! Worked really well too. Interesting story

Great job with this!