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		| lozza19910 Intermediate Vidder
 
 
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				|  Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 5:25 am    Post subject: "Kate Jack Sawyer All Fall Down " by lozza19910 |   |  
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				| ***Automated Message*** "Kate Jack Sawyer All Fall Down " 07-17-2008
 This is a AU please read youtube for the description.
      I hope you guys like this im so proud of it Song: All Fall Down  by One Republic
 Vidder: lozza19910
 Length: 3:58 (26.5 WMV)
 
 Warning: Contains Mature Themes
 
 Link(s): http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=APIA_Vgiy4s
 
 
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		| fabri086 Expert Vidder
 
  
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		| lozza19910 Intermediate Vidder
 
 
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				|  Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 10:58 am    Post subject: Kate Jack Sawyer All Fall Down  by lozza19910 |   |  
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				| Awwwww thank you  fabri086 that is sooooo sweet!!!! im really really really so happy that you liked the stroy, it took me ages!!!!! Im soooooo proud of it!!!! i kinda wanted to make a cliffhanger at the end!!!!      Thank you 4 commenting *HUGS* |  | 
	
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		| nikkimonique Expert Vidder
 
  
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				|  Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 12:37 pm    Post subject: |   |  
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				| Wow! I'm so very impressed! I loved loved loved the dark turn it took. My favorite part was when Kate went to go see Jack after Sawyer had just beat her up and she shows him that she's handcuffed still(wow that was messed up ) and he's like "How did this happen?" Very cool scene! Loved the ending too with Sawyer about to break down the door! I'm giving you gold for this one, you earned it! _________________
 
   
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		| lozza19910 Intermediate Vidder
 
 
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				|  Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 1:09 pm    Post subject: Kate Jack Sawyer All Fall Down  by lozza19910 |   |  
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				| Awwwwwwww thank you!!!!! youve just made my day im so HAPPY RIGHT NOW      Im glad you liked the part were Jack says 'How did this happen' it got me ages to get it just right  Thank you YAY GOLD!!!!            |  | 
	
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		| littleton_pace Council Member
 
  
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				|  Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 1:26 pm    Post subject: Kate Jack Sawyer All Fall Down  by lozza19910 |   |  
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				| oohh; creepy ending!!! i really loved your audio in this. jack asking kate how she got hurt was really clever ;P and the part where kate said "he hit me"  some of the scenes were a little piecey tho, like when sawyer hit kate the first time and you had three different scenes of her falling and it wasn't as fluid; but keep at it ;P really cool AU!!!     |  | 
	
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		| nikkimonique Expert Vidder
 
  
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				|  Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 2:17 pm    Post subject: |   |  
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				| Yeah agree...some of the AU scenes were a little choppy but I tend to over look stuff like that when the story is so awesome...I barely noticed....dont' worry too much about it...its hard with WMM....but I hope you make more AUs....you'll get the hang of it.  _________________
 
   
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