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kilianh Intermediate Vidder
Joined: 13 May 2008 Posts: 4
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kilianh Intermediate Vidder
Joined: 13 May 2008 Posts: 4
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Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 5:29 pm Post subject: |
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It's my second video. I think it's better than my first one. It's a little bit funny, but I've made it for the May-contest, so Jack is a supergirl in this vid. Please comment, so I can make my third video better. Thanks! |
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littleton_pace Council Member
Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 55699 Location: the nest
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Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 6:22 am Post subject: Jack - Supergirl (Lost music vid) by kilianh |
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I really quite liked this one I thought it started off strong but it kinda drifted away a little in the middle when you stayed on scenes too long. like the one when the hatch floods; if you'd cut that and perhaps used the beat a little more it would've been better. but i really liked it. i can see how much effort you put into it so i really want you to keep making vids if you cut scenes a little and utilize beat use you'll only get better good luck in the comp! |
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Aislynn Council Member
Joined: 03 Feb 2005 Posts: 35782 Location: Sawyerville, USA
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Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 9:09 pm Post subject: |
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Like Kat said, I'd suggest just cutting down long scenes and using the beat as much as possible in future vids. I did really enjoy this one, though! I liked how it really does work as a genuine Jack character study! Really nice job for only a second vid! |
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