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		| kilianh Intermediate Vidder
 
 
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		| kilianh Intermediate Vidder
 
 
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				|  Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 5:29 pm    Post subject: |   |  
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				| It's my second video. I think it's better than my first one. It's a little bit funny, but I've made it for the May-contest, so Jack is a supergirl in this vid. Please comment, so I can make my third video better. Thanks! |  | 
	
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		| littleton_pace Council Member
 
  
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				|  Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 6:22 am    Post subject: Jack - Supergirl (Lost music vid) by kilianh |   |  
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				| I really quite liked this one  I thought it started off strong but it kinda drifted away a little in the middle when you stayed on scenes too long. like the one when the hatch floods; if you'd cut that and perhaps used the beat a little more it would've been better. but i really liked it. i can see how much effort you put into it so i really want you to keep making vids  if you cut scenes a little and utilize beat use you'll only get better  good luck in the comp!  |  | 
	
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		| Aislynn Council Member
 
 
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				|  Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 9:09 pm    Post subject: |   |  
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				| Like Kat said, I'd suggest just cutting down long scenes and using the beat as much as possible in future vids. I did really enjoy this one, though! I liked how it really does work as a genuine Jack character study!  Really nice job for only a second vid!  |  | 
	
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