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Jinlovessunxx Expert Vidder
Joined: 12 Aug 2007 Posts: 4917 Location: Pennsylvania, USA
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 7:35 pm Post subject: "Untouchable" by Jinlovessunxx |
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"Untouchable" 08-27-2007
A video about Juliet and Kate fighting over their love for Jack. *Thanks to Paul for clip help!
Song: Untouchable by Garbage
Vidder: Jinlovessunxx
Length: 3:56 (27.1 MB WMV)
Link(s): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2LwPQN7KUGI
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Jemmz Council Member
Joined: 21 Oct 2006 Posts: 21154 Location: Ultra (DE)
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 7:52 pm Post subject: |
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Yay! Well, I said this on YouTube:
Quote: | Woot for the Juliet/Kate rivalry! Again your video editing really credits your vid and I -LOVE- Garbage! Great song you used for this, you really got the message through on their relationships in their whole love triangle thing (as if Jack and Kate needed to be in ANOTHER triangle/rectangle thingy Lol) |
I don't know what else to add except good job and keep it up! |
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Jinlovessunxx Expert Vidder
Joined: 12 Aug 2007 Posts: 4917 Location: Pennsylvania, USA
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 7:54 pm Post subject: |
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Yay! I'm soooo glad you watched it and liked it. Yes, I saw your Youtube comment, and I loved it. You really know how to comment something and really make someone happy about it. You always know what I'm trying to capture in my vids and that's always appreciative, so thank you very much Jemma!...and Garbage is the bomb. _________________ Jin is lost in Sunlation forever..
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SassyLostie2 Expert Vidder
Joined: 08 Aug 2007 Posts: 28138 Location: California
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 8:31 pm Post subject: |
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Wow, I really loved your effects (tho some were a little weird, they were cool) and the fast pace. It looked really good, how you tried to fit the beat, especially in some parts...I'm not always too amazing at that. I try tho. Anyway, I thought the storyline was good (and you captured it well with the clips), and the song choice too. Very nicely done.
PS - I particularly liked the Skate parts. I know, typical me. _________________
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PatheticDreamer Intermediate Vidder
Joined: 13 Jun 2006 Posts: 63 Location: LOST
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 10:47 pm Post subject: Untouchable by Jinlovessunxx |
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This was incredible, hun. I'm a Jate/Jacket fan so i really enjoyed every single part of this vid. The effects were so cool, i dunno how you managed to work with fast paced clips and still tell an awesome storyline. Great Work!! |
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Jinlovessunxx Expert Vidder
Joined: 12 Aug 2007 Posts: 4917 Location: Pennsylvania, USA
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 11:40 pm Post subject: |
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Sassy- Aww, thank you so much for watching and commenting. Yes, it is really hard to fit the beats, but it's always good to try! I'm happy you liked the effects, some of them were weird yes, but I loved how cool they were for the song. Skate is amazing yes, I love them both together. Thank you again!
Pathetic Dreamer- Thank you very much for watching and commenting. It was challenging to try to do those fast clips and tell the storyline, but I'm so happy you found it awesome and incredible! Thank you again! _________________ Jin is lost in Sunlation forever..
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Polarbear Expert Vidder
Joined: 26 Jun 2005 Posts: 13684 Location: having a bowl of brown with Davos
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:11 am Post subject: Untouchable by Jinlovessunxx |
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Yay you finished it I loved the Juliet and Kate over Jack's eye at the start. I also really lked a lot of your overlay clips where you put one clip on top of another and when you used blue colour-tone on Jack that worked really well.
I think you misunderstood what I told you about making use of the 'doo doo' beats. But to be honest I'm glad you went your own way with it. It's good you can express how you want to use the beat use in your own way. Don't be afraid to experiment and take risks it's the only way you'll learn other than checking out other people's videos What I meant was you cut a clip in two by splitting a clip. Then don't animate the zoom in just cut straight into a clip or out of it and it works really well on the beats.
Good job!! |
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Jinlovessunxx Expert Vidder
Joined: 12 Aug 2007 Posts: 4917 Location: Pennsylvania, USA
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:25 am Post subject: |
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Yay, thank you for commenting, watching and reviewing for me Paul! I couldn't believe how better my video looked after you betaed it, like one-hundred times better!
I'm happy you liked the beginning, because I thought if it just had Jacks eye it would look like it was his POV not Juliet or Kates.
Oh I did? I kinda thought I did..but then I thought I didn't...but yay! You liked what I did, and that really makes me happy and proud. Thank you so much again Paul! _________________ Jin is lost in Sunlation forever..
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littleton_pace Council Member
Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 55699 Location: the nest
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Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 5:35 pm Post subject: |
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sorry it took to song for me to watch, Kate slipped my mind and then i saw your invite on youtube and i was like "crap! gotta watch that vid " added you, by the way. im glad you put that you were jinlovessunxx in ur bio cos i didnt know who it was and i dont accept ppl i dunno anways, onto ur vid:
I loved the watery, hypnotic effect that was really cool! and the overlay effect was used really well, especially wen jack saw kate and sawyer in the monitor. I loved the beginning with jack's eye as well I must say i found it a lil bit confusing with Jack and Kate and Kate and sawyer and Jack and Juliet and getting mixed up while watching and wondering whose POV i was watching. but thats prob cos its three in the morning here all in all i enjoyed it _________________
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Jinlovessunxx Expert Vidder
Joined: 12 Aug 2007 Posts: 4917 Location: Pennsylvania, USA
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Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 6:26 pm Post subject: |
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LOL, it's fine, I'm glad you replied thank you so much! Yes, my name was old and I couldn't change it so I put my name there that people know most! Thanks for accepting me.
Anyways, I'm so glad you liked those effects and the beginning. The POV was supposed to be just from Kate and Juliets, the lyrics pretty much explain it all and you can relate the lyrics to Kate and Juliets POV...but yeah 3 in the morning, and you still replied was really, really, nice! Thanks again! _________________ Jin is lost in Sunlation forever..
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thefilmchick Expert Vidder
Joined: 22 May 2006 Posts: 4030 Location: Albany, NY
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Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 1:46 am Post subject: |
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Yo! Good job, even if it does have Jack in it. Your effects are very well used here as well, particularly for the plinky, off-kilter rhythm of the song you chose.
Nice use of the rapid ease in, without it getting too camera-seasick. I didn't get motion sickness, anyway.
I like the beats on the chorus, and the sort of stop-motion rhythm to it. I think you could have made that even more stop-start at the beginning too, if you wanted. The warp effect is nice, and judiciously used, too.
I never thought I would say this, but there's a little too much Sawyer in there. Maybe keep him just to the cage scenes so that it has an effect on Jack, otherwise from Kate's perspective it's about the conflict btw Sawyer and Jack, and in your video, it seems she's made up her mind, right?
Just some thoughts. _________________ I saw a werewolf drinking a pina colada at Trader Vic's. His hair was perfect.
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Jinlovessunxx Expert Vidder
Joined: 12 Aug 2007 Posts: 4917 Location: Pennsylvania, USA
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Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 11:52 am Post subject: |
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Thanks so much Kate, on your thoughts! You know they always mean alot to me, and I agree about the beats...and I'm glad you didn't get that way!!
The Sawyer is mostly for Kates decision, but for when he pours the water out that is for Juliet to show that she always trying to make peace with everyone.
Thank you for watching and commenting! _________________ Jin is lost in Sunlation forever..
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