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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 5:54 am Post subject: Kidnapped |
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I have no idea what possessed me to do this fic. But... I did. Only a little bit now.
What happened to Charlie and Claire when they were kidnapped by Ethan? Find out... now:
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"Hello there." Charlie and Claire looked up at Ethan. "Ethan, where's Jack?" Ethan didn't answer, he just stared at Claire. Charlie put his arm around Claire and pulled her closer. Ethan continued to stare at her. "Ethan!"
Ethan started to walk forward. "Get away from her, Charlie."
"No. Ethan, what are you doing?" Ethan continued toward them. Charlie let go of Claire and stepped in front of her. "What the hell do you think you're--" Ethan's fist smashed into his Charlie's jaw. Claire screamed as Charlie slammed down onto the jungle floor.
Ethan pulled a long piece of rope out of his pocket. Charlie was still dazed laying on the ground. Ethan grabbed Claire's wrist and she struggled to break away. She couldn't fight him and finally gave him when she realized her hand was tied to a tree. Ethan backed away from the tree. Charlie jumped up and grabbed onto the back of Ethan's head and bashed his face into the tree Claire was tied to. Claire screamed again when Ethan's blood splattered onto her face.
Charlie grabbed Ethan and turned him around, forming his hand into a fist. Before getting to hit Ethan, Ethan's fist once again hit into Charlie's jaw. Charlie slid through the mud and tried to get up but Ethan grabbed him. Ethan dragged Charlie up towards him and grabbed his head and violently twisted it. Charlie's eyes closed suddenly at his neck cracked. Claire was shocked and couldn't breathe. Ethan just killed Charlie right in front of her. She started to pull on her arm trying to break the rope. Claire briefly looked over and saw Charlie's head was at a bizarre angle someones head should never be at but she then tried to focus on the rope when suddenly she heard his neck crack again. She jumped when she heard the crack and looked over at his body. His head was straightened with his body again and Ethan was standing up.
"He's not dead if you're worried."
"What did you do?" she managed through the tears. "I just cracked his neck causing him to go into shock and pass out. It never broke. I just screwed with some nerves."
"Who are you?"
"In good time, Claire. In good time."
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Charlie gasped for breath as blood dripped out of his mouth. He opened his eyes. There was rope all around him. "Claire!?" he tried to scream but barely a whisper came out. Something stabbed into his back and scraped down, leaving him in pain. He flipped over and suddenly, dirt was flying into his face.
He looked up and could Ethan pulled the rope Charlie was tangled in. Ethan wasn't just pulled him, Charlie looked over to Ethan's other hand and saw another rope net. Claire was passed out inside.
"Claire! Charlie!" Ethan stopped in his tracks and looked back.
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Jack looked around the jungle. "Jack!" Locke yelled, trying to shut him up. "Claire!" Jack looked back at Locke. Locke slowly lifted his finger to his mouth. "Shh."
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Ethan quickly turned back around and his arm hit a against a tree. A branch snapped. He looked back to make sure Jack and Locke weren't coming. He looked down and saw Charlie staring up at him.
Charlie blacked out the second Ethan's foot smashed across his face.
More soon...
Last edited by MovieGuy on Sat Jan 28, 2006 5:09 am; edited 1 time in total |
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Tom Co.
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 11:32 pm Post subject: |
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Most excelent LOST fic MG, you can submit it after i get my LOST fan fic awards up and running, when ever that is |
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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 2:30 am Post subject: |
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Thanks, Tom. |
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fallen_angel Advanced Vidder
Joined: 20 Feb 2005 Posts: 4376 Location: Australia
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 2:35 am Post subject: |
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AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how do you manage to juggle so many fics at once
the end creeped me out..... lol
"in good time Claire, in good time" ahhhhh _________________ Pirates 3 - MAY 25th 2007!!! |
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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 7:59 am Post subject: |
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That's a secret I will never tell...
Thanks. |
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Aislynn Council Member
Joined: 03 Feb 2005 Posts: 35782 Location: Sawyerville, USA
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 10:06 pm Post subject: |
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I have 2 words for you...
AWE...
...SOME!!!
I swear, I'm in SUCH an Ethan mood (probably all these Ethan vids have a little something to do with it ), so this was a most excellent time to read this!
I really liked it! I've always wondered how Ethan managed to kidnap Claire right out from under Charlie and this was such a believable way that it could've happened. Most cool! I hope you do continue this one! |
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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 6:03 am Post subject: |
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Thanks Aislynn!
It has been a while since I've written a fic that is just LOST. Anyway, writing a bit right now. |
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Aislynn Council Member
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Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 10:08 pm Post subject: |
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Going to write more on this one?
Not to be pesty or anything but...
Are ya? Huh? Huh? HUH?
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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 10:12 pm Post subject: |
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yes... expect update sometime in the next two years |
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Tom Co.
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Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 10:34 pm Post subject: |
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sounds good *waits paitintly infront of computer* |
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Aislynn Council Member
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Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 11:54 pm Post subject: |
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2 years wait for next chapter = Aislynn
What's with all the math today, I wonder? |
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Tom Co.
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Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 12:18 am Post subject: |
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we at LVI belive in world where math rules |
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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 5:09 am Post subject: |
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update
check out the bold part in post #1.
Only a small piece right now. Hopefully the next part is longer |
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Harry
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Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 5:14 am Post subject: |
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loved it.... more????? when? |
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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 5:20 am Post subject: |
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lol soon... Most likely Monday or Tuesday. I gotta write a nw Biker Boys right now |
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