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The Amazing Adventures of Aislynn - Season Two.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2005 5:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's your fault. If you stop with the annoyingness I'll re-write it.

And thanks Aislynn.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2005 5:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

no need to re-write it

it sucks either way you do it. So, one hr till ep 8!
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2005 5:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

No! And that's mean! I'm doing the real ep 7 tomorrow and you're not gonna die.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2005 8:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

hehe that was a great ep... Broadband man is funny and it's funny how Aislynn can't see how she and Jessica look so alike lol hilarious

Can't wait for the "real" ep 7 lol
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2005 1:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, here's the REAL ep seven. You'll probably find it very confusing, especially the final conversation in the ep, and it was very confusing to write too lol, so if you can't figure out some stuff then just ask me.

The Amazing Adventures of Aislynn

Episode 2x07:
Guess Who?

Day 88: Somewhere Evil in Adelaide.


Vicky opened her eyes. She was in a jail cell of some sort, strapped to the wall. She looked across to see Nate, Colin, Paul, Josh and either Aislynn or Jess tied up against the wall with her. One of the Marci walked in.

“Don’t you people ever get tired of this?” asked Colin.

“No. We play fun games in our spare time.” said Marcus 11.

Nate laughed a bit. “What games?”

“Err…like monopoly, chess, and…” Marcus 11 threw a knife, which landed right next to Nate’s head. “Darting.” Nate gulped.

Ronald McDonald walked in. “Now, boys and girls, where’s that money of yours?” he asked in an evil tone.

“It’s back in the airport.” said Vicky. “In a suitcase. Idiots!”

“Oh, crap.” said Ronald. “Well, what does your suitcase look like?” He put a knife to Vicky’s throat to make her tell.

“Uhh…” said Vicky. “It’s dark green and is made out of leather.”

“Great!” grinned Ronald. “Let’s go to the airport, gentlemen, and find us that suitcase!” Him and several Marci walked off, while the rest of the Marci stood at the front of the jail door, guarding it.

“What a bunch of idiots.” whispered Vicky. “Like I’d ever buy a gross green leather bag!”

Josh laughed, then turned to the girl next to him. “Err…are you Jessica or Aislynn?”

“Huh?” replied the girl.

“What’s your name?” asked Josh again.

“I…I don’t know.” she said, looking completely blank. “Who are you people?”




Broadband Man peaked over the top of a chair in the airport. The girl next to him yanked him back down. “Are they still there?” asked the girl.

“Negative.” replied Broadband Man seriously. “I think we are safe to come out now.” They both stood up. “Who are you?” asked Broadband Man, suddenly realizing he wasn’t sure if it was Aislynn or Jess.

“I’m Aislynn!” laughed the girl. “Duh!”

“Oh…sorry.” said Broadband Man. “I sensed it was you, I just…wasn’t sure.”

“Uh…huh…” said Aislynn. “Anyway, where do you think the Marci have taken the others?”

“My Inter-netted range is telling me…they’re in Adelaide.” replied Broadband Man.

Aislynn rolled her eyes. “Could you be slightly more specific?”

“Sorry. I really need a windows update before I do that.” said Broadband Man.

“Okay…” said Aislynn, incredibly confused. Suddenly Broadband Man stared in shock at something.

“Quick, run!” he yelled, speeding out of the airport. Aislynn looked. Ronald and the Marci were back, and were running towards them with an odd green leather suitcase. She ran straight after Broadband Man.

“This way!” yelled Ronald, rushing through the crowds. The Marci all turned a corner with him. Aislynn and Broadband Man had disappeared. “We know you’re there!” yelled Ronald, slowly walking around the place. Suddenly Broadband Man jumped down, on his back. Ronald screamed like a little girl and ran off. The Marci just stood there, embarrassed at their leader.

“Go away, jerks!” yelled Broadband Man, and they all nodded and walked off, still embarrassed.

“Ha!” yelled Broadband Man. “Another triumph for Broadband Man!”

“Wow, err, thanks!” said Aislynn. “I don’t know how to thank you.” Broadband Man grinned at her, and suddenly kissed her. She kissed him back.



Meanwhile, in the jail cell…

“Err, I think I remember someone calling me Jane Nottingham.” said the girl.

“No!” snapped Paul. “You’re either Aislynn or Jessica!”

“I’m sorry!” replied the girl. “I don’t remember!”

“That must’ve been a pretty nasty bump on the head!” said Vicky, comforting her. “I’m sure you’ll remember in time.”

“Thankyou.” said the girl. “I hope so.” Soon this kind moment was ruined as Ronald McDonald ran in, fuming with anger. And yet he still had a white and red tattoo around his lips making it look like he was smiling.

“What the hell is this?!?” asked Ronald angrily, emptying a green leather suitcase. Out came a pile of disgusting looking healthy treats.

“Oh, you just don’t listen!” said Vicky, shaking her head. “It’s meant to be a dark green colour, not that light green one. It almost looks black!”

Foolishly, Ronald believed her, and stormed back out, leaving the gross healthy snacks on the ground.

“Guys…” Nate whispered as soon as it was okay to speak. “I think I could do the cookie thing-a-ma-jig with that fruit bar.”

“What? You still remember how to do that?” asked Paul.

“Ofcourse!” grinned Nate. “And I think it could work with that muesli stuff!”

“It’s worth a try, I guess.” said Colin. “But how will you be able to reach it?”

Vicky looked at the bars she was tied to, and moved them around. They weren’t proper jail cell bars! They were the type used in the playgrounds at McDonalds! She broke free easily, and the others quickly did the same. Nate picked up the muesli bar.

“Oh, god I hope this works!” said Nate, closing his eyes. He muttered the Chinese words while moving his hand around over the top of it. “Mingchou Kapowie!!!!!” he yelled, as the Marci turned around and ran towards him. The muesli bar blew up, and sent everyone flying across the room. “Hmm, it didn’t work that well.” said Nate getting up. The others got up with him, and started heading for the door as the Marci behind them lay on the floor helplessly.

“Not so fast!” yelled Ronald, jumping out in front of them. The rest of the Marci walked in, with Broadband Man and the other girl, who was either Jessica or Aislynn. The entire group of them were dragged back in. The girl who had lost her memory whispered to her look-alike.

“Who are you?” she asked.

“I’m Jess.” whispered the girl. “But don’t tell anyone, okay? From now on, you tell people you’re Jess, and I’m Aislynn.”

The girl nodded, still confused. “Okay, my name is Jess.”

“Very good.” replied the girl. She gave an evil grin.

TO BE CONTINUED…
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2005 5:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

good one... i think
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2005 5:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks "Jess". If ya dont understand something say so.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2005 5:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

you can say MG

so... that final bit was confusing
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2005 5:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeh well it means that Jessica is pretending to be Aislynn. Aislynn doesn't remember anything so she's just gonna roll with it and call herself Jess.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2005 6:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

marcus wrote:
“What’s your name?” asked Josh again.

“I…I don’t know.” she said, looking completely blank. “Who are you people?”


The old amnesia plotline! I LOVE it!!!!

marcus wrote:
Aislynn rolled her eyes. “Could you be slightly more specific?”

“Sorry. I really need a windows update before I do that.” said Broadband Man.


That made me laugh SO hard, I can't even tell you! Yes, I've finally foraged into the world of Windows updates now that I've got broadband!

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“Wow, err, thanks!” said Aislynn. “I don’t know how to thank you.” Broadband Man grinned at her, and suddenly kissed her. She kissed him back.


[dreamy voice]Mmmm, Broadband Man...[/dreamy voice]

Wait a minute, what am I doing???

Okay, so it was Evil Me who did it! However, Evil Me would like to formally apologize to Vicky for macking on her man.

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“Oh, god I hope this works!” said Nate, closing his eyes. He muttered the Chinese words while moving his hand around over the top of it. “Mingchou Kapowie!!!!!” he yelled, as the Marci turned around and ran towards him. The muesli bar blew up, and sent everyone flying across the room. “Hmm, it didn’t work that well.” said Nate getting up.


Oh, holding my sides now from laughing...

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“Who are you?” she asked.

“I’m Jess.” whispered the girl. “But don’t tell anyone, okay? From now on, you tell people you’re Jess, and I’m Aislynn.”

The girl nodded, still confused. “Okay, my name is Jess.”

“Very good.” replied the girl. She gave an evil grin.


No, I'm Jane freakin' Nottingham!

Ooo, I love all the suspense and intrigue. What's Jess's real mission here? Why does she want people to think that she's me and I'm her?

*on pins and needles*

Ouchie!



Totally great chapter, Marcus!

~Aislynn
"But you can call me Jane, or you can call me Jess, or you can call me the Primo, Numero Uno Raving Sawyerette, or you can call me..."
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2005 6:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

So does that mean I will have some actions with Jess too?
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2005 6:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks guys. And yeh, Nate, that's right.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2005 6:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cool! LOL I got both of em.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2005 6:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Umm, the real Aislynn doesn't even know who you are now. So now you're with Jessica, or "Aislynn". This fic's getting pretty confusing now, eh? But hopefully its suspenseful confusing, not "Wtf?" confusing.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 6:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

wow that was totally confusing..... in a good way though

i knew she would be evil!!!!!!!

and OMG that bitch is tryin to steal my man..........kill her!!!!!!!!
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