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clairebennettforever · Intermediate Vidder Joined: 20 Dec 2007 Posts: 76

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"What Might Have Been" 02-21-2010
A Skate Video; my first one i am putting on here in like forever. Hope you enjoy.
Song: what might have been by little texas
Vidder: clairebennettforever
Length: 4:03 (32.2mb wmv)

Warning: Contains Mature Themes

Link(s): http://www.metacafe.com/watch/4204981/what_might_have_been_a_skate_kate_and_sawyer_lost_video/

thefilmchick · Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 10:06 pm Post subject:

I'm not a particularly shippy person, and I'm not a fan of country music, but I think you did a good job with both--it held my attention, and for a long song (4:03) that's saying something.

I feel like the buildup/bridge at 2:20ish ('same old look in your eyes') could have been used a little more--you had a nice gentle motion going until then, and it needed to explode a little more. It didn't quite do that.

Not a lot of talky clips, which is good: The only one that caught my eye was around 3:30. Other than that, good use of non-talky scenes, which consider Sawyer and Kate like to yap at each other, is more difficult than it might seem.

I feel like a jerk bringing this up, but: Your ending thing thanks the 'writets' (sic) of Lost. I'd keep an eye on typoes in the future, because it quibbled me.

Solid job, altogether.
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