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LVI Bot · Joined: 16 May 2005 Posts: 10111

"The Other 48 Days" 11-04-2006
I see this as my first vid I made a long time ago. Maybe you already guessed it, but its about The Other 48 Days.
Song: Call Me When Youre Sober by Evanescence
Vidder: LostFreakJ
Length: 3:29 (14.1MB WMV)

Link(s): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UlyiiWK4N8Q
http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=1380808813

Deadfall · Intermediate Vidder Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 52

GREAT VID!!!!!!! Loved the music, and the clips you chose.
i miss the tailies lol AWESOME JOB!

KajaM · Expert Vidder Joined: 28 Jun 2005 Posts: 10438

Sorry, but I can't agree with what Deadfall said.

This vid just doesn't make sense to me. First of all, what does this song have to do with the Tailies?
Furthermore, there's no theme or structure in your vid. It's just a collection of random "The Other 48 Days" clips.

I know it's only your second vid. Before you start working on a vid, you really need to have a theme... something you can work with. The song choice is very important, too, because your clips have to match with the lyrics. And I just don't see any connection between "Call me when your sober" and the Tailies, sorry.

This is constructive criticism only. It's just meant to give you an idea of some things you should pay more attention to next time.
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LostFreakJ · Intermediate Vidder Joined: 01 Nov 2006 Posts: 43

I totally agree with what you said, KajaM, but in that time I didn't know anything about making a good music video. I just thought the beat does the work and not the song or the lyrics. Since I'm on LVI I know what my mistakes are and I just posted the vid here to see if there are other mistakes I didn't see yet

But thank you for being honest

And thank you for your reaction too, Deadfall

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