Lost Video Island

[Distress Signal]

First of all, I'm very proud that I got a silver CP for the video and a place on the leaderboard (hanging off the edge). As much as there were a few strong points, though, I feel I could have done a lot better with it when I was rushing to slop it together and finish it in time. So, as always, I'm hungry for some honest constructive feedback on what I did- and what I could have done. I was a little confused even when finishing up the vid what the story was really about, so maybe that was the problem, or maybe not.


So, what's the verdict? And don't worry about possibly hurting my feelings, believe me, I've already ridiculed myself enough on it. It's not one of my best.
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