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"its been awhile" by lostsk8ergirl

 
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 12, 2006 9:39 pm    Post subject: "its been awhile" by lostsk8ergirl

"its been awhile" 06-12-2006
my 1st vid: a little sana lots of skate and 100percent sawyery goodness
Song: its been awhile by staind
Vidder: lostsk8ergirl
Length: 4:30 (11.2 MB WMV)

Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=blUPUGibpgQ

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tacoshack27
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 12, 2006 9:48 pm    

Nice video I really enjoyed that. You chose many good clips and paced them well with the song. Good work!

Mike
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lostsk8ergirl
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 12:10 am    

thank u
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villana81


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PostPosted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 6:12 pm    Post subject: great vid!

your video was really great! I liked it a lot, I love Staind!
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lostsk8ergirl
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 11:28 pm    

yay!
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 10:34 pm    Post subject: Skate Rocks?

I love that song! I never knew it was by Staind, and I never heard a song that I liked that was by Staind (No offense to Staind). I love the video, too. One thing that I disliked about the end - "Skate Rocks. Remember That." Jate Rocks, Remember that. Don't wanna sound offensive or mean or anything like that, but Jack deserves Kate more than Sawyer. No offense. Love the song, again!
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Hobbes
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 10:56 pm    

That was really promising fore a first video, awesome job! I loved how all the scenes you picked actually had a point to them, and were'nt just picked because they fit some lyric (like showing a picture of night to fit "night", etc it happens a lot ) and you told Sawyer's story really well. Keep it up and your vids should be here in no time
Things I'd watch out for if I were you:
-random clips: we can tell when you put something in just to fit the spot. There were a few in here, but mrst were really thoughtful, which was awesome! Just watch out.
-length: making a song shorter so the vid doesn't get boring isn't a crime.
-originality: with something really different in the video, you could kick ass.
-climax: you need some part of the video that just makes the viewer say "wow", somethign to build it all up to. Try to find a song that does this.
-beat use: see "climax", as this usually helps it a lot

Hopefully I wasn't intruding with that advice, and hopefully it helps you with future vids. It's just that I saw some great talent here, and I hope you keep on improving!
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lostsk8ergirl
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 8:58 pm    

you werent intruding at all, this advice is very helpful, thanku!
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