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The Amazing Adventures of Aislynn - Season Three
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marcus
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PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 9:48 am    

Thanks MG.

Yeah, it's sposed to be kinda different. With season two, even though it was still popular, some people weren't commenting very often. I thought about why this was and realised it was cos people were sick of the same old formula, even if they found it entertaining, so they didn't give comments on the fic as much since it was just all the same and they felt there was no need to comment. So I decided this time when Aislynn was kidnapped, they didn't all go to save her and just escape Kongshaw and continue on their way to make Aislynn famous. They split up more and some new characters are added in to stir things up a bit, plus the bad guys are having a much bigger part with the war etc.
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PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 8:47 pm    

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“Oh, really?” laughed the warrior. “Then why do you look exactly like the dead twin on the ground?”

Aislynn quickly hid her tears then said “Because I am the dead twin!”

“Huh?” asked the warrior.

“I’m her ghost.” said Aislynn.

The warrior laughed slightly, but then stared at Aislynn, who kept a perfectly straight face. “You…You’re a ghost?” he stuttered.

“Yes.” said Aislynn. “And if you come one step closer, I’ll kill you with my spiritual powers!”

The warrior screamed and ran out of the door. Aislynn shook her head. The group all rushed out of the cupboard.

“Nice work, Ais’.” said Steph, patting her on the shoulder. Caroline nodded, still crying heavily.

More footsteps came just a couple of minutes later. Aislynn pointed towards the cupboard and the group rushed in. This time she stayed out on purpose. “I told you to leave!” she said, putting on a ghost face and raising her arms high.

Nate walked into the room and saw her ghost impression, then let out a high-pitched scream. Colin burst out laughing and walked out of the cupboard, the others following him.


That sounds so much like something I'd do: "Uh, no, I'm her...uh...ghost! I'm her ghost! Boo!"

Oh... *holds sides from laughing so much* I loved it all! (Except for the part where The Boys still don't like me... )

Great ep!
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PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 9:17 pm    

Awesome as always Gerbil! The story just gets better and better with each ep! I am officially a AAA addict!
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PostPosted: Fri May 12, 2006 10:41 pm    

Thanks Aislynn and Steph.
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PostPosted: Sat May 13, 2006 8:45 am    

WICKED!!!!!!! as usual Marcus... I have to agree with MG when he says this is shaping up to be the best season yet
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PostPosted: Sat May 13, 2006 10:21 am    

Thanks Vicky.
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PostPosted: Thu May 18, 2006 12:32 pm    

*cough*bump*cough*


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PostPosted: Thu May 18, 2006 12:34 pm    

lol It's only been a week.

I'm just doing a lot of stuff right now, I'm planning on writing an episode of something tomorrow, probably The Leftovers though since I've been sposed to do that for ages. Then some time over the weekend I'll write a new AAA ep.
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PostPosted: Thu May 18, 2006 12:36 pm    

lol i know I just felt like bumping something
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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2006 2:25 am    

This ep is...meh. The next ep will be better.

The Amazing Adventures of Aislynn

Episode 3x08:
Broadcasting.

Day 132: The Indonesian TV Station.


“Action!” yelled the woman. A big “ON AIR” sign lit up, and Aislynn was live across the country. She looked down at her speech on cards that she had prepared earlier.

“Hello, people of Indonesia.” she said. “My name is Aislynn Kongshaw-Alba-Mangsheng-Nottingham…If you like you can call me Aislynn. I’m daughter to the evil Father Kongshaw, who has started a very one-sided and unfair World War. Many of you are too scared to join the army and fight against Kongshaw. But I’m here today to change that…”


The TV screens on the Marci’s planes all switched on, to show the Indonesian News, which would be followed by a bunch of Frasier repeats.

“Darn it, I hate the news!” yelled Marcus 74. “We want Frasier!”

“Frasier sucks.” said Paul. “They roll out the same stupid jokes every time.” The Marci all stared at him angrily. “Umm…I mean, Frasier rocks!” he said. The Marci all cheered.

“Everyone, shut up!” yelled Ronald McDonald. “Look!” He pointed towards the screen. Aislynn was on there.

“…In conclusion, you must join us today! Alone we can’t do much, but together we can end this stupid war!” said Aislynn on the TV screen. “Not only will you be saving our world from evil hands, but you will also be getting free cookies from me. I’m very quick at making them.”

The Marci all growled angrily. Paul just stared at the screen, with the look of guilt on his face.


“And…we’re off air!” said the woman. “Great speech, Aislynn.”

“Thanks!” said Aislynn. A group of people came running up to her.

“Lady, we’re getting heaps of calls already asking to join the army!” one man said. Aislynn’s friends ran up to her.

“Great job, Aislynn!” grinned Vicky.

“Aislynn!” said a man in a big black suit. “I represent the ABC News in America. I’d like you to use your speech on our news!”

“Sure!” said Aislynn.

Another man in a brown suit came up to her. “I represent the Fox 8 News. I’d also like to buy your speech!”

“Great!” said Aislynn. Aislynn was suddenly crowded with people from different channels all around the world.

“Wow.” said Colin. “Where’d they all come from?”

Matt shrugged. “Who cares?”

“Meh.” said Colin.


There was a long silence on the plane, as the Marci all sat there, their mouths open in shock at Aislynn’s speech. Paul looked around nervously. “I think I’m gonna go to the bathroom…” he said. He got out of his chair.

Nate, Josh and Steph all sat in the back of the plane. “Quick, this is our chance!” whispered Josh.

Paul opened the bathroom door. “AHH!!!” he yelled. Nate, Josh and Steph were all standing there.

“Err, Paul, is everything okay?” Ronald yelled.

“Uhh…yeah!” Paul yelled back. “I just get scared of plane toilets…they’re creepy.” The Marci all nodded their heads in agreement then went back to looking shocked about Aislynn’s speech. Paul rolled his eyes and walked into the bathroom, closing the door.

“What on Earth are you guys doing here?” he whispered angrily.

“We know you’re not evil, Paul.” said Steph. “We’re here to get you to come back to the good side.”

“Umm…who are you?” asked Paul.

“Oh, sorry…” said Nate. “Paul, this is Steph. Steph, this is Paul.”

“Okay…” said Paul. “Guys, just get outta here, okay? I don’t wanna hurt you guys but I’m not part of your team anymore!”

“But you want to be, don’t you?” asked Josh.

Paul hesitated to answer. “It doesn’t matter what I want! I’m with the Marci now!” he finally said.

“You still have a choice, Paul.” replied Nate. “You can become a mole for us, and ruin the Marci’s plan!”

“It’s not as simple as that!” snapped Paul.

“Yes it is.” Steph said simply.

Paul stared at Steph. “You guys have already found a replacement for me!” he laughed, pointing at her. “I don’t see why you need me!”

“Because we’re your friends, Paul!” said Josh.

Paul sighed. “Not anymore, guys.” he said. “Sorry, but…I can’t help you.”

“Just think about it, Paul!” said Steph. “We’re not gonna end this argument here.”

“Fine, but the argument won’t get anywhere.” Paul replied angrily. “Now, if you’ll excuse me, I need to actually use the bathroom!”

“Oh yeah…” said Nate. He went through an emergency door that led to the back of the plane, and the others followed. The door shut, and Paul sat down, burying his face in his hands.


Day 133: The Indonesian TV Station.

“…Not only will you be saving our world from evil hands, but you will also be getting free cookies from me. I’m very quick at making them.” Aislynn finished reading her speech for the thirtieth time. The “ON AIR” sign went off. “Okay, is that it?” she asked.

“Yeah.” said a cameraman.

“I don’t see why they couldn’t have just showed the same tape to every channel.” said Colin.

“Well, we would, but we need to have the logo of the channel behind Aislynn every time she says her speech.” said the woman in charge. “So we need to keep changing the banner.”

“That’s stupid.” said Matt.

“Well, if you can think of a better way to do it I’d like to hear it!” replied the woman. Matt shrugged.

Aislynn flopped down on the couch in the green room. “Wow, I’m tired!” she said.

“Hello, people of Canada…” said Aislynn’s voice on the TV screen in the room. “My name is Aislynn Kongshaw-Alba-Mang--”

“Turn it off!” yelled Aislynn. “Darn it, I’m getting sick of that speech!” Vicky changed the channel.

“Hello, people of India. My name is Ais--”

Vicky changed the channel again.

“Hello, people of Jamaica. My name--”

She changed the channel again and again. They were all filled with Aislynn’s speech.

“Wow, you’ve really made an impact, Aislynn!” said Vicky. She changed the channel once more.

“Hello, Aislynn.” said a voice different to Aislynn. They all looked up at the TV screen to see Father Kongshaw in New Zealand. “You think you’re the only one who can get on TV? This speech is going all around the world, following your triumphant little speech! People from all around the world, don’t you dare try to fight my army. You’ll be squashed like a bug! I suggest you stay at home and let this war be finished as soon as possible! That is all. Goodbye.”

Vicky turned the TV off.

“Oh no.” said Aislynn.

“Aislynn, we’re getting a lot of angry calls all of a sudden, saying you almost made them join the army!” said a man, walking into the green room. “What should we tell them?”

Aislynn hesitated to answer, and looked around at her friends. Finally she spoke. “Tell them to keep watching their TV screens. And then organise a live debate with my father across the world.”

“Uhh…okay.” said the man. He ran off.

Aislynn smiled. “I had a feeling he would do this…” she said. “Tomorrow, I’m gonna get back all those viewers to fight for us!”

“How do you know they’ll trust you when Kongshaw will be there arguing with you?” asked Matt.

“Trust me.” Aislynn grinned.


“A debate?” asked Kongshaw.

“Yes, sir.” replied one of his warriors. “You’ll be going live across the world tomorrow. Be careful, it could be the argument that decides who wins the war.”

Kongshaw growled. “Very well!” he said. “Now leave me to think!”

“Yes sir.” said the warrior. He ran off to a tent. “Hey…” he whispered. “You there?”

“Yeah, yeah!” replied Colin’s mother. “I’m here!” She hugged him then kissed him. Just at that moment a large group of planes flew over the tents.

“Oh my god!” exclaimed the warrior. “The other army is here already! Sorry, I’ve gotta go!” He rushed out as a group of other warriors ran over to where the planes landed. But it wasn’t the opposition. Ronald McDonald stepped out of one, and the entire army of Marci followed out of his plane and the other planes.

Paul walked out of the plane behind the Marci, scratching his head. He looked at the millions of Marci. They were capable of killing lots and lots of people. And yet he had a chance to stop them. He walked over to Kongshaw’s army, with the biggest decision of his life on his shoulders.

TO BE CONTINUED…
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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2006 2:41 am    

marcus wrote:
Paul opened the bathroom door. “AHH!!!” he yelled. Nate, Josh and Steph were all standing there.

“Err, Paul, is everything okay?” Ronald yelled.

“Uhh…yeah!” Paul yelled back. “I just get scared of plane toilets…they’re creepy.”


*hysterical laughter* you get the idea

Oh, sides hurting from laughing... The whole thing was great, especially having to keep doing that same speech so they could change the banners...

Great job! Can't wait for the big debate!
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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2006 2:42 am    

And yay, I got to be first to respond! I've been so behind on everything this week, I hope this is a good omen!
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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2006 2:43 am    

Thanks Aislynn. I didn't like this ep very much though. It's an important ep, but kinda...boring.
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PostPosted: Sat May 20, 2006 2:59 am    

Gerbil, that was awesome! Frasier...LOL I liked that ep! Good job! You shouldn't be so hard on yurself...that's what I do to myself.
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PostPosted: Sun May 21, 2006 7:32 am    

LMAO did you post this at CE coz I didn't notice so I've only jsut read it

I didn't think this ep was "meh" I thought it was great, this whole season has been great iparticularly liked this part

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“Fine, but the argument won’t get anywhere.” Paul replied angrily. “Now, if you’ll excuse me, I need to actually use the bathroom!”



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