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[MovieGuy]

1x11: Colin

LOL I know it seems like Im only writing myself but this is good becuase it has the begginnging of a major storyline in season 2

[Hollywood]

Man I've been away alot recently, so much that I didn't even know that Harry had quit writing the fic. Damn!!! lol.

Ah well, I'm just glad that you took it over MG cause I'm like completely addicted to this fic. I mean, I even watched Point Pleasant just so Harry would bring it back the last time he quit. lol. I'm a big FAN!!!

Anyway, I just finsihed reading the update MG and I'm gonna be completely honest with ya....





























































I LOVED IT of course!!!
You did a great job on it. It had the same ol' jaz and spice it did when Harry was writing it, at least it did to me anyway.
Characters all seemed the same is what I mean.
LOL You and Pauly eating strawberries at Harry's funeral was pretty classic and poor Shells

Very awesome update indeed. Like usual, I can't wait for the next!
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Thanks Holly!!

[lostzilla]

I like it.
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Thanks Nate

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New one possibly within the hour, if not then you'll get it in the morning

[MovieGuy]

LVI: Secrets

Episode Eleven: Colin
Starring : Holly, Paul, Nate, Colin, Vicky, Shelly, Marcus, Tom, Liz, and Jaime
Guest Starring : Aislynn, Ashley and Michael

Written by : Colin

Previously on Secrets...

Colin got up from the table and walked over to one of the waitresses who was taking a coffee break, sitting down a couple tables down from them.
“Hello there,” he said walking up to her.
“Hi,” she said looking up at him.
“So, you new here? I haven't seen you here before”.
“Oh, my dad owns the place and this is my punishment for going out drinking on a school night,” she explained.

“Shelly!” Harry ran onto the streets and pushed her out of the way just in time before the car hit her. He wasn’t fast enough to get himself out of the way though. His body smashed into the front of the car, hitting him like a brick wall. His body flew ten feet away from where had gotten hit, blood everywhere.
His body lay there, lifeless on the cement. Shelly screamed at the top of her lungs, seeing Harry’s dead, bloody body on the road.
The car driver got out of his car, in tears as he saw the boy’s body. Shelly had tears running down her face, still screaming.
“HARRY!” Shelly screamed. “HARRY!!!”

“Colin,” a man said from behind him. Colin turned around and saw that it was Michael, one of the cooks.
“Oh hey Mike,” Colin said as he got up from his seat and walked over to where Michael was standing. “What’s up?”
“Not much, just need to tell you that Ais called,” he said.
“Oh yeah?”
“Yeah, she said she’s not coming to work today and told me to tell you”.
“Oh thanks,” Colin nodded.

Paul and Holly laid on the ground in front of the couch, completely naked. Their clothes were spread all over the room. They both laid there staring at the ceiling. Holly opened her mouth about to say something but stopped. Paul did the same. Holly finally opened her mouth, "Wow."
"I agree," Pauly answered.
Holly didn't move, "Wow."

“Thanks Mike, that kid really needs to get a clue,” Aislynn said as Mike came into the kitchen.
“Anything for my Ais,” he smiled and placed the dishes into the sink.

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Holly vomited even more into the toilet. It'd been nearly three weeks since Harry died. Paul stumbled into the bathroom in his boxers. "Are you okay?" he mumbled.
"Yeah," she said as sge wiped some puke off her mouth, "I think I have stomach flu or something."
"I probably shouldn't have screwed you last night then, huh?"
Holly laughed, "Maybe not. Could you get the Tylenol out of there for me?"
"Yeah," He pulled it out of the cabinet and handed it to her. "Next time, can you wait til it's not early to puke?"
"Paul, it's 1:30 in the afternoon."
"I know," he said walking out of the bathroom.

Shelly sat at Mandy's eating a plate of fries. "Want anything else?" Shelly looked up at Aislynn.
"Oh, a shake would be great."
"I'm sure it would be," Aislynn said. Shelly looked at her confused. Aislynn rolled her eyes, "So you want a shake?"
"Yes."
"Okay," Aislynn started to walk toward the kitchen as Colin walked in. "Oh, shit," Aislynn mumbled.
"Oh, hey Ais!"
"Hi, Colin."
"I haven't seen you for a while. Not since..." Colin trailed off.
"Since Whatshisname died," Aislynn said.
"His name was Harry," Colin said, looking over at Shelly who was finishing her fries.
"Oh, sorry," Aislynn cleared her throat, "Mike said you've been looking for me."
"Um, yeah was. It wasn't important or anything I just--"
"Colin, would you like to go out tonight?" Colin stopped and stared at her. That came out of nowhere.
"Uh, okay."
"Great," she said smiling. "Can you pick me up here?"
"Uh, okay."
"Fantastic," she gave him a peck on the cheek and walked back into the kitchen. Colin watched her leave. "Okay."

Aislynn walked into the back and threw her tray down on a table. "I need a shake!" Aislynn yelled out.
"Comin' up," Mike said and he grabbed a glass and put it in front of the ice cream machine and pushed the chocolate button.
"Hey, Ais," he smiled and ran over and kissed her. She kissed him back, shoving her tongue down her throat. She backed up and smiled at him. "Hey," she said.

Secrets

Colin sat down next to Shelly. "Hey, Shells."
"Hi. How are you today?"
"Weird. Aislynn just asked me out."
"Whoa. That's..." Shelly looked across the street and saw Marcus walking towards the door. "Shit..."
"What?" Colin looked over and saw Marcus, "Oh, shit. Shelly, are you going--" He turnd and looked at her. She was standing up and running for the bathroom. "Shelly!" She dashed into the bathroom just as Marcus came in. Colin looked at him, "Hey Marcus."
"Hey." Marcus sat down next to Colin in the booth. Colin looekd around and then checked his watch. "Oh, shoot. I gotta go. I have a date to prepare for."
"A date? You?"
"Yeah, a date."
"You?" Colin glared at him and then got up and left. Aislynn walked out holding a shake. Shelly was gone. Marcus was at the table now. "Here, Marcus," she sat the glass down and slid it across the table. He wasn't ready to grab it and it fell and hit into his crotch. He screamed in pain as the glass shattered on his dick and chocolate flew everywhere. Aislynn chuckled and walked back into the kitchen.

Holly puked more into the toilet. Paul walked in and sat down next to her. "Holly?"
"What?"
"I'm gona go out. Is that okay?"
"Yes, go. My head hurts and I need silence between my vomiting." He laughed and walked out of the bathroom. Holly stuck her head over the toilet and vomited.

Shelly looked out the bathroom door and saw Marcus wiping the chocolate off his pants. She sighed and closed the door.

There was a knock at Nate's door. Vicky opened it. "Hey there, sexy--"
Paul stood on the other side. "Vicky?"
"Paul?" Paul looked down at what she was wearing... nothing. He turned around. "You should wear clothes when you answer the door."
"I thought you were Nate."
"Nate?! You're--"
"Yeah, we are."
"Oh... well. I'm with Holly."
"Figured."
"When will Nate be back?"
"Soon." Nate came around the corner and was face to face with Paul, Vicky nude over his shoulder. "What the hell is going down?" Nate asked, calm and slightly confused.
"Nothing," Paul said, he looked back and saw Vicky was still standing there. "I wanted to talk to you about something, Nate."
Nate sighed and nodded, "I know you're with Holly now."
"I know. That's what I wanted to talk to you about," Paul looked back at Nate after having staredat Vicky for a second too long.
"Well, I'll meet you at Mandy's in about ten minutes, all right?" Nate asked. Paul nodded. Nate walked past him and closed the door.
"Whoa," Paul shook the image of hot naked Vicky out of his head and walked away.

Shelly woke up in the bathroom. She'd been asleep for almost four hours. She got up and stumbled out of the bathroom, hoping Marcus wouldn't be there. Luckily, he wasn't. She yawned and walked out of Mandy's.

Tom and Ashley sat in Harry's room, going through his things. "Why did we get stuck with doing this?" Tom asked, going through a giant stack of Cracked magazines.
"Becuase we're the only ones who haven't really been helping out since he died, Tom." Ashley said, flipping through a photo album, smiling as she remembered some of the events behind the pictures.
"Yeah," Tom threw some issues of Cracked across onto the bed. "You know, from what I saw of him, Harry never read Cracked."
Ashley looked over at the magazines. "Have you opened any of them, Tom?"
"No, why?"
"Open one." Tom glanced at her then picked up an issue and opened it. He looked at it and his jaw dropped. "From what I saw of him, Harry was never a porn addict."
Ashley laughed and came over and looked at the magazine. "Wow," her jaw dropped.
"I didn't know the human body could be positioned that way."
"Is her arm behind her--"
"Yeah," Tom laughed.
"Well, that's pretty nice." They both laughed and looked at each other. The laugh turned to them both smiling at each other. That turned into doing it on Harry's bed.

Nate sat down in front of Paul at Mandy's. It was starting to get dark out. "What do you want Paul?"
"Do you remember what we've done for the past two years around this time of year?"
Nate thought for a second, "We've gone on a... Paul, I--"
"Listen to me, okay? I didn't want to hook up with Holly, it just happened."
"I understand but she is my ex-girlfriend and--"
"You've dated one of my exs."
"What? You knew Amy?"
"No, not Amy," Paul looked around the diner hoping no one he knew was close. He looked in closer to Nate, "I dated Vicky."
"What? When?"
"Last year, before I got involved with Jaime."
"Whoa. You kept it secret? This long?"
"Yeah."
"Why are you telling me this now?"
"So you know I'm not mad at you."
"What?"
"We're even. I borked Holly, you borked Vicky."
"Borked?"
"What I'm saying is... you're my best friend. And I don't want a stupid girl to get in the way of that."
"Vicky isn't stupid."
"Neither is Holly."
"So, what I'm saying is... do you want to go or not?"
Nate thought for a minute then shook his head. "Okay... yeah."
"Great! Do you want to get going tomorrow?"
"Sure... I'll meet you at... your place." Nate shook his head. "That wouldn't work. Meet at my place."
"All right, great." They got up and left Mandy's just as Colin, walked in.

Aislynn wasn't in her waitress uniform, she was wearing a nice shirt and skirt. "Hey, Mike!"
Michael turned around and looked at it. "Wow. Looking good, Ais. Where are we going tonight?"
"Nowhere. I'm going to a girls-only party."
"Sounds odd and hot," he laughed and she gave him a kiss. "Can you lock up in twenty minutes for me?"
"Sure."
"Night, Mike."
"Night, babe." He turned back to whatever that brown thing was he was cooking.

"Hi," Aislynn said as she came up to Colin.
"Hey, how are you?"
"I'm great. Are we walknig to whereever we're eating?"
"Um... my driver's test isn't for another 6 months so... yeah."
"I have my dad's car for the night. I can drive."
"Oh, um, okay." Colin nodded, "Let's go then."
"Great! The car's out back," Aislynn said.

"Are you insane?" Holly asked sitting in the bed, staring at Paul who was on the other side of the room. "Paul, why would you do that?"
"Becuase I want to stay friends with him!"
"But that's a long time to be friends with him!"
"We've done for the past two years, we've enjoyed it!"
"What you're saying is ridiculous, that's 3 months away from me!"
"I know! That will be hard!"
"Will I be able to call you?"
"We have a strict no-phone calls thing."
Holly sighed, "Are you sure that's what you want?"
"Yeah, Holl. It is." She smiled.
"Okay. You're leaving tomorrow?"
"Yeah."
"Well, let's make the best of tonight then."
"I thought you have the stomach flu or something?"
"It went away a few hours ago. I'm fine now."
"Bitchin'," Paul said as he jumped into bed with Holly.

It'd been several hours since Colin and Aislynn had left Mandy's. They somehow conned the waiter at the restuarant out of a bottle of champagne and were now stumbling through the streets of town, drunk and singing songs from the 80s. They had made it through the 70s...

Wake me up before you go-go
Don't leave hanging on like a yo-yo
Wake me up before you go-go
Take me dancing tonight
I wanna hit that hiiigh

They both started laughing uncontrollably.
"How do I know that song's lyrics like that?" Colin laughed.
"I know!" Aislynn mumbled out. She came to a stop and looked at the building in front of her. It was Mandy's. "Look where we've ended up, Colin!"
"Where have we ended up?" Colin asked putting the bottle of champagne he's been holding up to his lips.
"We're back at the hellhole they call Mandy's."
"Oh, Aislynn, it's not that bad."
"Yes it is! Oh, how I'd love it if this place accidentally was destroyed."
"Oh, Ais, Ais, Ais. What on earth could happen to Mandy's? It's followed all the safety protocol there is hasn't it?"
"Yeah, but--"
"Thus, it's fine."
Aislynn stared up at the giant sign that said Many's. "I guess you're right," she put her hand toward Colin, "Gimme the champagne."
"Sure," He handed her the bottle and she walked forward to the wall. "Ais, what're you doing?" She pulled a loose brick out of the building's wall and backed up next to Colin.
"This'll be awesome," she said.
"What?" Colin asked and suddenly Aislynn threw the brick at Mandy's. It shattered through a window and alarms started blaring.
"Shit, Aislynn! What the hell are you doing?!" She threw the bottle of champagne through the broken window.
"Aislynn? What the hell!?" Colin yelled at her when he heard the bottle shatter inside the diner. She pulled out a lighter and lighted it. Colin's eyes bulged out and loooked at her. "Aislynn, no!" She threw it into the diner. Within a few seconds, the entire building was aflame. Colin stared in shock at the burning diner. Aislynn heard the sirens coming. She grabbed Colin by the hand.
"Come on! We gotta go!"

Aislynn and Colin ran off down the street as fire engines and police cars skidded to a stop around the burning Mandy's.

[MovieGuy]

Well... my follow-up to that uber-hard death ep, kinda set up a few things for the finale. Well... just the Nate and Paul thing. THat's it

[Harry]

You burnt down Mandy's!
awesome update MG, can't wait for the finale!

[MovieGuy]

It really just came to me when I sat down to write it. I mean, wouldn't it be awesome to see the place people hang out at on your fav show did destroyed?

So, season two will have everyone working on building Mandy's again

[MovieGuy]

Well, at least Harry liked it

[ebizmybef74]

I loved it too! (even though i wasn't in it) Loved the blunt

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That turned into doing it on Harry's bed.

Made me laugh super hard!
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Thanks

Yeah, I know Liz and Jaime weren't in it. I'm not sure wht I'm gonna do right now with Jaime and Liz's story I had was like just a sentence of her trying to call Kevin. It sucked

[ebizmybef74]

hmmmm what could Liz and Jaime do? i'm sure you'll think of something Colin...I'm not good at this stuff!
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... Jaime has a story in the finale

I think I'll get Liz and Kevinback together. I'll kill Nate, thatd be interesting