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ciaimpala Expert Vidder

Joined: 25 Nov 2008 Posts: 11823
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Aislynn Council Member
Joined: 03 Feb 2005 Posts: 35782
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Posted: Sun Jan 2, 2011 10:34 pm |
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Awww, what an adorable Sana!daughter! She really looks like she could be their child! (And she's just adorable to boot. )
That was a great storyline as well and I really enjoyed it a lot! ♥! |
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Brooke Expert Vidder
Joined: 01 Jul 2008 Posts: 24129
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Posted: Sun Jan 2, 2011 11:34 pm |
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I know I already commented over at Youtube but I really loved this Becca. You chose a great song; and the little girl really looks like she could have been Ana's daughter. Ana really scared me when she was kicking Sawyer. :Shock: It was VERY believable; and I loved the interactions and relationship of Jack and Sawyer. Jack was so very sweet to Sawyer. I loved the "I never want you to feel that way". |
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littleton_pace Council Member

Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 55699
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Posted: Mon Jan 3, 2011 1:23 am |
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aww, that was so cute Bec!!! Emily was so adorable, i loved the scenes of her and Sawyer, like him giving her a flower And David playing piano at the ballet rehersal was a really clever way to have Jack and Sawyer meet  and i liked the scene at the end of the happy family; Sawyer giving the flower to Jack was so cute  I would have loved to see more of the Jack/Sawyer courtship because what was there was really great; but it could have been fleshed out a little more  Still a great AU! You should definitely keep these up!  _________________

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nikkimonique Expert Vidder

Joined: 27 Jul 2007 Posts: 30478
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Posted: Mon Jan 3, 2011 9:13 pm |
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That was a really good story Becca! I loved it! Yay for the Jawyer loving at the end!! The Sana abuse scene was really believable to with the audio. oh and that little girl looked exactly like an Ana baby! haha too cute! _________________

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emmasholi Council Member

Joined: 02 Mar 2008 Posts: 15576
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Posted: Wed Jan 5, 2011 11:53 am Post subject: Me and Emily by ciaimpala |
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Aww I loved that Becca!!! :D Your story was fantastic, and I loved how you used the clips of that little girl from that film...I've forgotten what it's called now lol. She makes such a fantastic Sana baby  Those manniped scenes of Sawyer & their daughter were adorable. The ones of Ana abusing him were really well done too. Awesome job hun! :D |
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Jemmz Council Member
Joined: 21 Oct 2006 Posts: 21154
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Posted: Sat Jan 8, 2011 11:59 am Post subject: Me and Emily by ciaimpala |
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Great AU, Becca! That little girl is the spitting image of Ana-Lucia! Such a cutie! I really liked your story, and the manips of Sawyer and Jack together were brilliant! Awesome job!  |
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