littleton_pace Council Member

Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 55699
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Posted: Sun Oct 3, 2010 1:34 pm |
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Hey there!  welcome to LVI! 
This was a pretty nice first vid!  I liked the split screens, they were generally very clean and well cut around the facial expressions of both Kate and Sawyer. I would have liked to see you use the beats of the song more, because these harder, pop rock songs tend to give you solid drum beats to work with especially in the chorus I also think that some of the scenes ran on for a little too long, and again considering the speed/beats of the song, it makes it drag a little.
Definitely a great first vid!   _________________

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