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EMMALOUISE
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 4:23 am    Post subject: "Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1" by E

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"Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1" 03-28-2010
March 2010 contest submission
Song: until we bleed by meghan tonjes
Vidder: EMMALOUISE
Length: 2.44 (95.9 wmv)

Link(s): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I7yN1CBcGyo

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Polarbear
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 6:23 am    

Great AU work - really enjoyed it and looking forward to part 2!! Casting for Sawyer and Kate's kid was spot on.
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nikkimonique
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 4:27 pm    

[spoiler:7f841deedf]Oh no!! Kate gets shot? You better not kill her [/spoiler:7f841deedf]

This was great! You had some good AU scenes in there like when Sawyer gives Kate the sunflower and the french toast scene! I loved the scenes with Sawyer and his daughter too! Can't wait to see how its going to end!! When will part two be up?
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alyssap22
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 3:29 pm    Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE

I can't wait to see part two. That was incredible!!
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thefilmchick
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 5:39 pm    

Polarbear wrote:
Casting for Sawyer and Kate's kid was spot on.


Agreed with that; good casting. Spoilers for ending:

[spoiler:a2ab7719a5]Kate getting shot is a plus in my book.[/spoiler:a2ab7719a5]

Ahem. That aside, I liked the sense of storyline that threaded through this. Sawyer punching the mirror was effectively used. Most of the lip-synchs looked on-target: "She's beautiful" was the only one that jumped out at me as being off, only because "She looks just like you when she smiles" was exactly on the mouth movements.

Minor critique: The dolly out on Sawyer's face at the kitchen table felt a bit jarring. There was no technical problem with it, so I'm not sure why it felt a bit askance (maybe because there were no other dollied shots?) but it's a small concern.

Good job.
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Karowyn
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 10:47 pm    Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE

I loved your use of Effy as their daughter ;D
I thought that it was a really when constructed story although a teeny bit of the lip-syncs were slightly off but it didn't detract from the piece being beautiful overall

I can't WAIT to find out what happens next
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eloramoon
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 1, 2010 3:44 am    Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE

Ooo, that was awesome! Great job! Good luck in the contest!
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Aislynn
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 6, 2010 6:05 am    

Great AU storyline and some really awesome manipped scenes! I loved the french toast one in particular. And yikes, what a cliffhanger! Looking forward to the next part! Good work!
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Charmed_Charlee
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 6, 2010 7:53 pm    Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE

Wow a very awesome job I loved the casting of their daughter being Effy from skins
The song was very cool, it worked really well for the video
Awww I loved the proposal scene, and wow the ending what a way to leave it lol.
Great job, and good luck in the contest
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littleton_pace
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 8, 2010 6:35 am    

gorgeous colouring Emma!!! Just beautiful great story too!! kate coming through with her promise about Clementine; excellent never realized how much Effy really looks a lot like Cassidy:) chilling ending as well my only question is, what happened to Cassidy? Is Kate raising Clementine, or was she just telling Sawyer where/who she was now? Or is Clementine meant to be sawyer and kate's daughter? cannot wait for part 2!!
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Uruviel
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 9, 2010 6:01 am    Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE

Nice AU! Looking forward to the next part!
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EMMALOUISE
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 10:04 am    Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE

Thanks for all the great comments,
@littleton-pace
In my vid Kate is Clementines mother, Cassidy is not in the storyline
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emmasholi
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 10:31 am    Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE

Ooh brilliant vid!!! I loved the storyline and how you used Effy as Clementine, the scenes between her and Sawyer were really nicely done!! Wonderful job, I really enjoyed it and can't wait to see the next part!
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Lostwithoutdom
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:29 am    Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE

Gorgeous vid, and great job with casting Effy, I loved that you used her! Beautiful editing, i loved the coloring. Your manips were wonderful, i really loved watching this!
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Jinlovessunxx
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 11, 2010 2:24 pm    Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE

Wooah, this was excellent!!!!!! I loved the song choice, very gorgeous! Your use of Effy as Sawyer's daughter was soo great, (Skins is my second favorite show next to Lost, so Skins and Lost=Epic ) I really loved the coloring and editing in this video, it looked really elegant and lovely. I liked your use of the sideways clips of Sawyer coming to the door with the flower to Kate!! The ending was absolutely WOW, can't wait to see the next video of this, it'll be so brilliant! Good luck in the contest!
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