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EMMALOUISE Expert Vidder
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Polarbear Expert Vidder
Joined: 26 Jun 2005 Posts: 13684
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Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 6:23 am |
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| Great AU work - really enjoyed it and looking forward to part 2!! Casting for Sawyer and Kate's kid was spot on. |
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nikkimonique Expert Vidder
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Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 4:27 pm |
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[spoiler:7f841deedf]Oh no!! Kate gets shot? You better not kill her [/spoiler:7f841deedf]
This was great! You had some good AU scenes in there like when Sawyer gives Kate the sunflower and the french toast scene! I loved the scenes with Sawyer and his daughter too! Can't wait to see how its going to end!! When will part two be up?  |
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alyssap22 Expert Vidder
Joined: 20 Jul 2008 Posts: 306
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Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 3:29 pm Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE |
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| I can't wait to see part two. That was incredible!! |
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thefilmchick Expert Vidder
Joined: 22 May 2006 Posts: 4030
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Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 5:39 pm |
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| Polarbear wrote: | | Casting for Sawyer and Kate's kid was spot on. |
Agreed with that; good casting. Spoilers for ending:
[spoiler:a2ab7719a5]Kate getting shot is a plus in my book.[/spoiler:a2ab7719a5]
Ahem. That aside, I liked the sense of storyline that threaded through this. Sawyer punching the mirror was effectively used. Most of the lip-synchs looked on-target: "She's beautiful" was the only one that jumped out at me as being off, only because "She looks just like you when she smiles" was exactly on the mouth movements.
Minor critique: The dolly out on Sawyer's face at the kitchen table felt a bit jarring. There was no technical problem with it, so I'm not sure why it felt a bit askance (maybe because there were no other dollied shots?) but it's a small concern.
Good job. |
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Karowyn Expert Vidder
Joined: 06 Mar 2006 Posts: 344
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Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 10:47 pm Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE |
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I loved your use of Effy as their daughter ;D
I thought that it was a really when constructed story although a teeny bit of the lip-syncs were slightly off but it didn't detract from the piece being beautiful overall 
I can't WAIT to find out what happens next  |
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eloramoon Council Member
Joined: 24 Feb 2008 Posts: 9077
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Posted: Thu Apr 1, 2010 3:44 am Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE |
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Ooo, that was awesome! Great job! Good luck in the contest!  |
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Aislynn Council Member
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Posted: Tue Apr 6, 2010 6:05 am |
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Great AU storyline and some really awesome manipped scenes! I loved the french toast one in particular. And yikes, what a cliffhanger! Looking forward to the next part! Good work!  |
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Charmed_Charlee Expert Vidder
Joined: 03 Jun 2006 Posts: 18232
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Posted: Tue Apr 6, 2010 7:53 pm Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE |
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Wow a very awesome job I loved the casting of their daughter being Effy from skins 
The song was very cool, it worked really well for the video 
Awww I loved the proposal scene, and wow the ending what a way to leave it lol.
Great job, and good luck in the contest  |
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littleton_pace Council Member
Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 55699
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Posted: Thu Apr 8, 2010 6:35 am |
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gorgeous colouring Emma!!!  Just beautiful  great story too!! kate coming through with her promise about Clementine; excellent never realized how much Effy really looks a lot like Cassidy:) chilling ending as well  my only question is, what happened to Cassidy? Is Kate raising Clementine, or was she just telling Sawyer where/who she was now? Or is Clementine meant to be sawyer and kate's daughter? cannot wait for part 2!!   |
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Uruviel Council Member
Joined: 31 Mar 2005 Posts: 21849
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Posted: Fri Apr 9, 2010 6:01 am Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE |
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Nice AU! Looking forward to the next part! |
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EMMALOUISE Expert Vidder
Joined: 28 Jun 2009 Posts: 439
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 10:04 am Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE |
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Thanks for all the great comments,
@littleton-pace
In my vid Kate is Clementines mother, Cassidy is not in the storyline  |
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emmasholi Council Member
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Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 10:31 am Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE |
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Ooh brilliant vid!!! I loved the storyline and how you used Effy as Clementine, the scenes between her and Sawyer were really nicely done!! Wonderful job, I really enjoyed it and can't wait to see the next part!  |
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Lostwithoutdom Expert Vidder
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Posted: Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:29 am Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE |
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Gorgeous vid, and great job with casting Effy, I loved that you used her! Beautiful editing, i loved the coloring. Your manips were wonderful, i really loved watching this!  |
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Jinlovessunxx Expert Vidder
Joined: 12 Aug 2007 Posts: 4917
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Posted: Sun Apr 11, 2010 2:24 pm Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE |
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Wooah, this was excellent!!!!!! I loved the song choice, very gorgeous! Your use of Effy as Sawyer's daughter was soo great, (Skins is my second favorite show next to Lost, so Skins and Lost=Epic ) I really loved the coloring and editing in this video, it looked really elegant and lovely. I liked your use of the sideways clips of Sawyer coming to the door with the flower to Kate!! The ending was absolutely WOW, can't wait to see the next video of this, it'll be so brilliant! Good luck in the contest!  |
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