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[Belle MacFarlane]

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"I'm Sorry :: Carrie Copeland (fanfic/rp trailer)" 02-15-2010
Trailer for season 6 of this fanfic/rp thingymabob focused on my OC Carrie (Mila Kunis)
Song: Doomsday by Doctor Who
Vidder: Belle MacFarlane
Length: 1:45 (9.11MB WMV)

Link(s): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pG8dTKpldoA
http://www.mediafire.com/?kfy0ymmcjtw

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[littleton_pace]

oooh; very cool!! I love Carrie already awesome way to show her story, being abandoned and depending on. she had a baby??? that was a detail you never revealed during our OC spam chats!! great use of Mila footage; that island stuff was so fitting and her kickass-ery loved her saying 'i'm sorry' too

Can we get a link to read the fic? I'd really like to see how carrie ties in with richard's life well done Millie!
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[Belle MacFarlane]

it's on a MEmerson fan board so you have to sign up, but it's free nyah: http://www.michaelemerson.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=fanfic&action=display&thread=2390 but Carrie doesn't come in 'til page, um.... 9. it's rather long although, you can read just Carrie's s6 stuff here: http://docs.google.com/leaf?id=0B9gGMlQc0nlLNzdhNTQzYWItZTJjOS00ZTAzLWE2NjktNDZkNjE2ZDcwNDRi&hl=en
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[HobbitRockGod]

Really good job, Millie! I really liked all the voiceovers you used. Carrie seems very cool!

[thefilmchick]

Reviewing by request!

Please note: I don't do OC fiction, so it's entirely lost on me as a subgenre of fanfic. Reviewing with blinders on to that.

Things seem to mesh well, though. I didn't get any sort of 'Wait, this isn't from Lost!' points, so well-done with the blend.

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Quibbles; take or leave:

The pings on 'What would you etc.' are well-done, but the title feels a bit too long to me. When it got to '... the man you love,' I was kind of waiting for the end. In future, I'd suggest limiting the pingy effect to five or six words at most; otherwise, it gets old.

Font quibble: Papyrus. I can recognize it instantly and have an instinctive dislike of it. That's my graphic design background/me being picky.

Keep your phrases the same: 'She was abandoned; she came back;' etc. Most of them are the same, but the first two aren't.

Visible credits with Des' 'Look down the barrel of the gun' and Danielle's 'Run, hide, or die' speech.
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I saw a werewolf drinking a pina colada at Trader Vic's. His hair was perfect.

[Brooke]

I thought the text, 'What would you do to be with the one you love?' Especially broken up word for word. I thought it was interesting, great manips of this character to the Island. It would be really interesting in future vids to see how she ties into Richard.

[Jemmz]

That was really cool, Millie! The Doctor Who music is beautiful!! Worked really well too. Interesting story Great job with this!