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MariaPurt Expert Vidder
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FrecklesPhoenix Expert Vidder

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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 11:16 pm Post subject: This place is a Prison by MariaPurt |
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Very good! Excellent beat use and the overall feel was so dark. Great work. I liked the Buffy tombstone in there... Great AU, excellent lyric interpretation. Gold from me. |
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nightdancer342 Expert Vidder
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 11:27 pm Post subject: This place is a Prison by MariaPurt |
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| I LOVE this!!! Amazing job!! Really, really cool! Everything was perfect. Nothing to even say! Great!! |
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nightdancer342 Expert Vidder
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 11:27 pm Post subject: This place is a Prison by MariaPurt |
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| I LOVE this!!! Amazing job!! Really, really cool! Everything was perfect. Nothing to even say! Great!! |
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Athena Alexandria Expert Vidder
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Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 2:13 am Post subject: This place is a Prison by MariaPurt |
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This was a really nice looking vid -- the butterfly effect was particularly cool -- but to be honest, I had no idea what was happening. I could sort of see it from what you wrote in the summary, but only as far as Juliet being haunted by something to do with a baby. I would have liked to see more in the way of storytelling -- Rachel's cancer was mentioned a few times in Juliet's flashbacks, so surely there were some soundbites you could use? It would have been perfect if it was a canon vid -- technically it was great -- but since it's AU, the story needs to be given a high priority. I hope you don't mind me pointing that out, but you do always say you value criticism. 
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littleton_pace Council Member

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Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 4:34 am |
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i always love your colouring, i struggling with getting black and white contrast to look good but you make it look effortless That butterfly effect was beautiful ;P I agree with Sam about the story, it did seem more canon-ish because it seemed just like Juliet was haunted but there was no real emphasis that it was her child. I did understand that the bub was sick tho; i loved those overlays of the x-ray. with your colouring it looked particularly beautiful ;P The ending was great too, nice use of those House scenes I always laugh when i watch that ep cos Liz's hair is so short lol  _________________

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Jemmz Council Member
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Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 5:54 pm Post subject: This place is a Prison by MariaPurt |
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Awesome video! I liked your overlays and beatuse. Great story too awesome work  |
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Uruviel Council Member
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Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 7:54 am Post subject: This place is a Prison by MariaPurt |
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Beautiful effects! Nice work.  |
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MariaPurt Expert Vidder
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Posted: Thu Dec 3, 2009 10:10 pm |
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Thanks everyone for your reviews! I see your point regarding the storyline - i just tried to keep it tech perfect (as good as i'm capable of) But i will try making a more plotful vid soon ;D _________________
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klost004 Expert Vidder

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eloramoon Council Member

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Posted: Sun Nov 7, 2010 1:44 am Post subject: This place is a Prison by MariaPurt |
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| Very cool! Great storyline, awesome editing, and I loved your coloring and the texture! |
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