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Manon · Advanced Vidder Joined: 04 May 2005 Posts: 295

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"Dont worry be happy" 10-04-2009
I was too late for the contest, but its a episode vid. 3x10 because it was such a happy episode. Enjoy! Comments are appreciated

Song: Dont worry be happy by Bob Marley
Vidder: Manon
Length: 3:54 (91,5MB WMV)

Link(s): http://www.vimeo.com/6890456

MariaPurt · Expert Vidder Joined: 14 Sep 2009 Posts: 631

I guess i can see where you were going with this, and you used one of my fave songs. The technical part has some things that i'd change a bit (i listed them below). I LOVE the idea and the thoughts you put into this video - as a matter of meaning it is great. So, here are the things that were odd to me:
- 0:10 after several fading you siply cut the clip to show the very same face, huh? Maybe fading thru black would be better. Or maybe if you did the same thing right before or right after - it would look amazing. Here, it looks a bit odd, i'd say.
- 0:18 - the voiceover beggins on a very soft part of the song and thus we can hear all the nnoises that are comming with it's end. If your voiceover is noisy, then put it's beginning to a beat or smth - so that we'd not her it's beginning this much. The same thing happened on 'is that arm?' thing
- 0:32 - what was that very short piece of clip for? Showing the boy in a car from disnatce and then showing him closer - i mean, it was too short - looked exacly like you didn't see this thing comming when you edited it.
- 0:37 - i can cleasly see the fist man with his hand - and that looks awesome! But the second clip, the second man or smth - i can only see the hand, and i can barely do that.
...and so on.
Silver for the idea.
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blackwolf1480 · Intermediate Vidder Joined: 20 Oct 2008 Posts: 829

Awwww, I loved it! This song fits this episode perfectly

I liked how you had all the funny quotes being said. Good luck in the contest!
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Manon · Advanced Vidder Joined: 04 May 2005 Posts: 295

heey, thanks MariaPurt for taking the time to comment

You are right, I was a bit sloppy making this video and I'm still working on the sound-thing. I'm not so good at that. Thanks anyway

blackwold1480, thanks so much! I loved all the quotes (I just forgot the one with Sawyer calling Hurley the international house of pancakes

) in this episode so I had to use them. Thanks for the comment