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LothwenUndomiel Intermediate Vidder
Joined: 05 Aug 2009 Posts: 6
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SawyerLittleton Advanced Vidder
Joined: 24 Jan 2009 Posts: 2457
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 5:25 pm |
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Aww LothwenUndomiel, that was a sweet video!
P O S I T I V E
- You're use of the lyrics were great" Especially with Suliet and Ronard! Great Job!
- You used many scenes that aren't used that often. The Jun departure as example or most of the Jate clips. Original! 
- The song was cute, not to short, not to long and fitted your story!
- Loved how you put a little AU in it with including Ana/Eko!
N E G A T I V E
- Since your video was about love mainly i don't think you should've added so many angsty scenes, like Juliet falling down the swan side. altho the scene was full of love to when i think about it.. ^^
- The format sizes of your clips variated the whole time! You should try, giving your clips all the same size format. it's easier and nicer to watch!
- While I think you choose LOVELY scenes for your video (as said above) i think you should try using scenes where they don't talk to much! if you wan't to include talking you could insert a audio? just an idea!
I liked the vid and i think you have talent so keep making videos! i'm a total vidding newbie to. so lets both improve our skills! loved your idea! 
★★★●● - 3/5 Stars
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LothwenUndomiel Intermediate Vidder
Joined: 05 Aug 2009 Posts: 6
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Posted: Thu Aug 13, 2009 12:37 pm |
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| Quote: | Aww LothwenUndomiel, that was a sweet video!
P O S I T I V E
- You're use of the lyrics were great" Especially with Suliet and Ronard! Great Job!
- You used many scenes that aren't used that often. The Jun departure as example or most of the Jate clips. Original!
- The song was cute, not to short, not to long and fitted your story!
- Loved how you put a little AU in it with including Ana/Eko!
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Thank you, very much.
| Quote: | N E G A T I V E
- Since your video was about love mainly i don't think you should've added so many angsty scenes, like Juliet falling down the swan side. altho the scene was full of love to when i think about it.. ^^
- The format sizes of your clips variated the whole time! You should try, giving your clips all the same size format. it's easier and nicer to watch!
- While I think you choose LOVELY scenes for your video (as said above) i think you should try using scenes where they don't talk to much! if you wan't to include talking you could insert a audio? just an idea!
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I agree about the formatting of the clips, and the talking. There was a lot...
However, I like the angst...I think it grounded the video a little bit...Those scenes were important, especially when it comes to Sawyer and Juliet.
The lyrics at the swan part say, "it's where you give your all, and give a little more." I thought it seemed appropriate. This video wasn't really intended to be completely fluffy, and I probably should have said that in the description.
Of course, that's a matter of opinion, and I thank you for yours.  |
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LothwenUndomiel Intermediate Vidder
Joined: 05 Aug 2009 Posts: 6
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Posted: Thu Aug 13, 2009 12:38 pm |
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| Quote: | Aww LothwenUndomiel, that was a sweet video!
P O S I T I V E
- You're use of the lyrics were great" Especially with Suliet and Ronard! Great Job!
- You used many scenes that aren't used that often. The Jun departure as example or most of the Jate clips. Original!
- The song was cute, not to short, not to long and fitted your story!
- Loved how you put a little AU in it with including Ana/Eko!
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Thank you, very much.
| Quote: | N E G A T I V E
- Since your video was about love mainly i don't think you should've added so many angsty scenes, like Juliet falling down the swan side. altho the scene was full of love to when i think about it.. ^^
- The format sizes of your clips variated the whole time! You should try, giving your clips all the same size format. it's easier and nicer to watch!
- While I think you choose LOVELY scenes for your video (as said above) i think you should try using scenes where they don't talk to much! if you wan't to include talking you could insert a audio? just an idea!
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I agree about the formatting of the clips, and the talking. There was a lot...
However, I like the angst...I think it grounded the video a little bit...Those scenes were important, especially when it comes to Sawyer and Juliet.
The lyrics at the swan part say, "it's where you give your all, and give a little more." I thought it seemed appropriate. This video wasn't really intended to be completely fluffy, and I probably should have said that in the description.
Of course, that's a matter of opinion, and I thank you for yours.  |
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