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[dl15]

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"We Are (AU)" 08-03-2009
July 2009 contest submission. Jacks plan seems to work but the losties slowly remember their time on the island. Sawyer, Jin and Kate each track down Jack for personal reasons.
Song: We Are by Ana Johnson
Vidder: dl15
Length: 3:57 (29.7MB WMV)

Link(s): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uypLTzUZu-0
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?ywz3dn2ozvt

[blackwolf1480]

I loved how the flash of the bomb matched that perticular song part Good luck in the contest

[dl15]

Thanks Please keep in mind it's my first ever AU video

[xXAngelicEvilXx]

Good job! The clips were a little long, but you matched things like the bomb dropping and the house blowing up to the beat, so it was still a great job! Great ideas and good luck!

[Uruviel]

Nice vid, the part where the bomb dropped was very well-done.

[littleton_pace]

oooh; i love this song always works well for these kind of vids

i would suggest cutting down on clips in the future, like the opening scene went on without editing, as in just as it played in the show, for almost a whole minute. that's really too long.

I did like the connections you made with with Jack and Locke and Jack and sawyer. But some of them felt unfinished. Like why did Sawyer go to see Jack? and why did Kate shoot Sawyer? and i wasn't sure what had happened at the end.

Very good first AU :] For the future; keep in mind the story of them and how the finer details play out because that adds to the vid on a whole
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[Lostwithoutdom]

Very nice for your first AU!

[Jinlovessunxx]

Ooh, very good job for your first AU vid! The song was great, and totally perfect for the Losties and their stories! Great beginning with the bomb dropping, and really great clip choices throughout the vid! Good luck in the contest!

[eloramoon]

Nice job!

[Aislynn]

Nice job for your first AU! I love the song, it really works great for the Losties! ♥!

[Charmed_Charlee]

Oooh yay I love this song
My only crit is that a few scenes ran a tad too long, but twas a great video
Good first au
Did Sawyer go into Jack's house? I was a little confused with it jumping to sun.
But great job and good luck in the contest

[dl15]

1390 wrote:

Oooh yay I love this song My only crit is that a few scenes ran a tad too long, but twas a great video Good first au Did Sawyer go into Jack's house? I was a little confused with it jumping to sun. But great job and good luck in the contest

That was what I meant to show, yes. tbh even I'm a tad confused about what happened

edit: oh, and thanks for the lovely comments, everyone!