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Freckles08
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 Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 7:46 am Post subject: "When Youre Gone AU" by Freckles08 |
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"When Youre Gone AU" 02-22-2009
Jack breaks up with Kate and she doesnt deal with it well. She turns to friends Juliet for support but is shocked when she finds out who Jack left her for contains scenes of self harm
Song: When Youre Gone by Avril Lavigne
Vidder: Freckles08
Length: 4.22 (77.2mb wmv)
Warning: Contains Mature Themes
Link(s): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y7MYivI1DqQ
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Uruviel
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| Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 8:04 am |
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Good vid! Nice AU scenes and cool storyline. 
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nikkimonique
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| Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:58 pm |
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Oh no did Kate die at the end? I couldn't tell. I really liked your storyline. It was so heartbreaking...especially the scenes of Kate cutting her self and when she was telling Jack that they were going to take the baby away....  Enjoyed it lots!
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khaleesi
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| Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 3:53 am Post subject: When Youre Gone AU by Freckles08 |
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That was super sad!! Really well done on the AU scenes, especially the cutting parts, it really looked convincing!!
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littleton_pace
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| Posted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 5:02 am Post subject: When Youre Gone AU by Freckles08 |
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Aww, that was really sad  The Thirteen scenes worked really well  :D I loved the storyline with Juliet betraying Kate by being with Jack ;] and the storyline with the bub was sad too Watch the audio volumes, they're tricky as hell, so it doesnt chop so suddenly  But you're storytelling is really clever; definitely keep it up |
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