littleton_pace
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Joined: 16 Nov 2006
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 Posted: Wed May 28, 2008 9:33 am Post subject: Bad Dream by Shell |
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You've got some really promising work here; I was really drawn in to keep watching and thats one of the main elements of vidding. Beautiful song too. You had some beat use; in the future I would suggest perhaps adding some more. Also; I would cut down on the scenes, perhaps not hang onto them longer than about 4 seconds; it keeps the vid moving and the watcher watching. I really liked the part where Claire woke up and Charlie had the baby; very clever idea switching it! i really liked the end too with the shots of them being a family together  You did a very good job with this  |
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