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[ToxicTrashAlarm]

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"ShannonDesmondClaire - Sober" 03-16-2008
Shannon is with Desmond but they break up. He is really upset until he meets Claire...
Song: Sober by Kelly Clarkson
Vidder: ToxicTrashAlarm
Length: 3:48 (26.0MB WMV)

Link(s): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mTicmfvt_eM
http://www.zshare.net/video/89921175a668f9/

[littleton_pace]

applause for ur first vid being such an AU triangle!! lol i really like the beginning with des and shannon. and the end where she ran up and saw them on the beach was cool, too very good first vid
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[Jinlovessunxx]

Really nice first vid! Just a quick question..did my download work that I gave you? If it didn't, I'm sorry!

Anyway, this was really interesting, it must have been hard to do Shannon and Desmond..but the Claire parts were really good. The Shannon and Desmond parts in the beginning were so believeable, and I liked how you had Shannon run with Vincent and find Claire and Des talking. Nice AU!
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[Captain Freya]

Wow! What an amazing first vid! Well done. Like everyone's said, I loved Shannon running and finding Desmond and Claire together. I also really liked the first scene where they broke up and the bit where Shannon and Claire were on the phone.
Also, I wanted to mention something that all these fancy-pants (said without a hint of irony! lol) Sony Vegas users probably won't have picked up on - adding audio. As a fellow WMM user, I know that it's a complicated and fussy process to add audio that isn't on that clip so congrats on adding those Claire screams to the scene where Desmond's running to save her. It took me forever and ever to figure out how to do that so it's really cool to see it in your first vid.
Some of the scenes were a little too dark to see that well, but I'm still voting gold cause it's really brave to do such a random AU for your first vid and you can see how hard you've worked on it.

[ToxicTrashAlarm]

Thank youu.
I really didn't expect to get such nice comments!

And jinlovessunxx I didn't use your clip because someone else got it to me first. Sorry for the hassle I caused you for the clip.

[ostia2006]

Well done. I enjoyed your video. :0)

[nikkimonique]

This was pretty cool! I really enjoyed the storyline and I loved the part when Des hears Claire screaming. It was cool how you added in the screams. I would have liked to have seen a little dialog in this vid though. Like the Shannon/Des break up scene...would have been cool to have some manipulated audio in there. Just a suggestion for your next one! Keep vidding, I like your stuff!
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[ToxicTrashAlarm]

Thank you both for watching
Thanks Nikki, I'll keep it in mind for my next videos

[Charmed_Charlee]

Oooh I love this song I remember hearing it on Smallville and falling in love with it

Great work on your video, especially for it being your first. Totally rocked :D Great AU scenes aswell they worked really well

[Naphie]

This was really good!! Loved the storyline! The editing was really good!
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