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"Lost Trailer" by CharliePaceIsARockGod

 
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CharliePaceIsARockGod
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Joined: 23 Feb 2008
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 6:11 am    Post subject: "Lost Trailer" by CharliePaceIsARockGod

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"Lost Trailer" 02-23-2008
Fan Made Lost trailer for season 4
Song: Tunes From Lost by Michael Giacchino
Vidder: CharliePaceIsARockGod
Length: 2:21 (3.9MB WMV)

Link(s): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tfAMP33T-48
http://s59.photobucket.com/albums/g284/lostpics1/?action=view¤t=TRAILER2_0001.flv

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IamSoLostRightNow
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Joined: 18 Sep 2006
Posts: 1070

PostPosted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 5:07 pm    Post subject: Lost Trailer by CharliePaceIsARockGod

I think you have a lot of potential. This was actually pretty good. I think my main criticism to you would be to condense your clips. Less is more, especially in trailers. Like in the beginning you didn't need to show the plane crash twice. For "friends were made" just clip "Remember I love you man. Yeah whatever I love you too." You don't need "I'll catch up with you later" Same for "And so were enemies" All you really need is Sawyer shouting "Let's trust this guy!" That's the important part of the scene. People get what you're trying to say. Your video moved a lot better toward the end. I liked the monster noise on the black screen and the end was quite nice. I just think that this trailer could go from good to AMAZING if you cut it from 2:20 to 1:30.
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