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sweetevangeline Expert Vidder
Joined: 24 Sep 2006 Posts: 231
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Posted: Sun Sep 9, 2007 11:27 am Post subject: "Clear the Area" by sweetevangeline |
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"Clear the Area" 09-09-2007
Kate and Juliet are together when Kate is captured by the others. Kate is treated well until Ben finds out about their relationship. Juliet frees Kate and together they escape, and go back to the beach. They start to make eachother jealous with Jack and S
Song: Clear the Area by Imogen Heap
Vidder: sweetevangeline
Length: 4:06 (78.2 wmv)
Link(s): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hawV8HTvvX4
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KajaM Expert Vidder
Joined: 28 Jun 2005 Posts: 10438
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Posted: Sun Sep 9, 2007 11:34 am |
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That was a very cool AU vid! I enjoyed it a lot! The moments were Juliet and Kate are jealous because of Sawyer/Jack are really well edited and look quite convincing and I loved the ending.
May I make a little suggestion though? (Only constructive cristicism, of course, since I loved your vid! ):
At the beginning of the vid, when Juliet and Kate are trying to escape, you could have used some clips of any of the Others like Danny following them or kinda "hunting" them. We see moments were they are running away or falling down, were they are scared but we don't see why that is so. Of course, we can all put two and two together and we understand why they are in a panic, but it would've been very neat to actually see it. It also would've given the vid a bit more action.
I really enjoyed this vid though. Great work! |
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littleton_pace Council Member
Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 55699
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Posted: Sun Sep 9, 2007 11:50 am |
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AU femslash; snaps to you for giving it a shot 
This was AWESOME!! I really loved it a lot. The story was really well done and I followed quite easily. Juliet and Kate kinda running away together to get away from Ben was kick ass, i really loved that. and the bits with kate/sawyer and jack/juliet but still keeping in with the kuliet angst. that was just really well done. I enjoyed it a whole lot! and the ending was very believable seeing as how well you told their story. Excellent work! |
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sweetevangeline Expert Vidder
Joined: 24 Sep 2006 Posts: 231
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Posted: Sun Sep 9, 2007 1:31 pm |
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littleton_pace - thanks
kajaM - thanks for the constructive critism - I'll have that in mind next time I make a vid.  |
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nikkimonique Expert Vidder
Joined: 27 Jul 2007 Posts: 30478
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Posted: Sun Sep 9, 2007 3:30 pm Post subject: Clear the Area by sweetevangeline |
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That was totally cool!
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Lil_rose Novice Vidder
Joined: 21 Apr 2007 Posts: 18
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Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 12:47 am |
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| That was really good! you got the expressions of kate and juliet perfect at the beach. it was awesome! |
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Uruviel Council Member
Joined: 31 Mar 2005 Posts: 21849
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Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 5:51 am Post subject: Clear the Area by sweetevangeline |
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Very good video!  |
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Kiska Expert Vidder
Joined: 08 Oct 2006 Posts: 242
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Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 2:50 pm Post subject: Clear the Area by sweetevangeline |
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Awesome AU!
i loved the beginning and the end was soooo cool! |
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Kuliet4ever Advanced Vidder
Joined: 05 Jan 2009 Posts: 13640
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Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 7:13 am Post subject: Clear the Area by sweetevangeline |
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| Great job! I love anything with Juliet...add some femslash into the mix and I <3 it! |
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