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LVI Bot · Joined: 16 May 2005 Posts: 10110

"The Struggle of Love" 11-11-2005
Jack/Kate Romance Video
Song: She Will Be Loved by Maroon 5
Vidder: Paganscribe
Length: 4:36 (19 MB WMV)

Link: http://media.putfile.com/Jate-Fan-Film---LOST

Danny Pegg · Joined: 12 Nov 2005 Posts: 11

No one gunna comment on my first atempt at a vid!

Danny Pegg · Joined: 12 Nov 2005 Posts: 11

Download link up!

http://rapidshare.de/files/7538761/JATE_VID_0001.wmv.html

ebizmybef74 · Intermediate Vidder Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Posts: 2641

Not bad for a first video. But not great either. Since I don't know exactly where to start on helping you to make a video I'll direct you to somewhere that can help you.

Hobbes, a brilliant genius, generously made two training videos to help people make videos better on what not to do.

http://www.lostvideo.net/submit.php

That is the link. You should check them out and find out how to make your video better!

P.S. I'm so glad we got another Jater Vidder on board!!!
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Danny Pegg · Joined: 12 Nov 2005 Posts: 11

Thanks. please check out the other JATE vid i have on here. Soon therell be another one too.

btvs · Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 8:13 pm Post subject:

I liked it and i liked the editing effects with the music and I always like a vid with dialogue and i like the beginning.
What you could do with maybe is a couple more clips and more edits that relate to the lyrics as that's always nice to watch and long clips lose the audiences attention
You can find more jate clips at the main evangeline lilly site which if you type her name in google you should find it
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Danny Pegg · Joined: 12 Nov 2005 Posts: 11

Thanks im glad you liked it. My beginning and end i really like. Also when kate grabs jacks arm in sync with the lyric "please dont say goodbye" i really liked that part.

I have heeded your comments, and hopefully they are resolved in my other newer vids on here. (i have made 4 in the last 2 days. The next two are still being processed, and i feel i get better with each one)

As this was my first im happy with these comments !

Thanks Guys!

ebizmybef74 · Intermediate Vidder Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Posts: 2641

Okay I'm back!

I just realized your problem.

4 vids in 2 days?!?!

That's a sign that you didn't work very hard on it and rushed through the videos. That maybe why your videos aren't getting such great feedback. Just my 2 cents.
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k4x · Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2005 5:10 am Post subject:

Danny Pegg · Joined: 12 Nov 2005 Posts: 11

I know that could be the cause of why they arent perfect - but i literally spent hours trying to sort out timing and efects etc but with WMM - and im new to that too - i oculdnt do alot better since it is my first.

But i am trying to get better with each one.

(new one coming soon - i think its the first vid of its kind!)