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dayln03
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So, this video didn't turn out the way i had invisioned it at ALL 
I probably should've not posted it until i'd revised it a little more but I had had it up to here with my Vegas, that thing wasn't gonna cooperate w/ me if my life had depended on it, so yeah the audio clips are all screwed up and uggh...
oh well, you win some you lose some 
oh and here's the youtube link
-- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BSIjpzL23pY
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That was so good! I can't even pick out one part that was my favourite! How smart were you at using voice overs?!
| dayln03 wrote: | | the audio clips are all screwed up and uggh... |
They sounded fine to me! Very cleverly done 
This is one of the best 'Jawyer' trailers/vids that i've seen in a long while. Excellent job
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I thought it was clever and very well done. The splice job on this was very believable, you used great clips.
Great job. Don't fret the audio. That's in your head brotha.
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I have a new favourite Jawyer vid! Yay!
Wonderful editing (voiceovers sounded great to me ) with a really entertaining (ahem, bedroom and shower scene...splendid! )
storyline.
I especially LOVED the mix of fluff, angst and most importantly, romance that was conveyed. |
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Kate.
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Sawyer - "Hey there sunshine" This made me LAUGH.
Loved it, I love the whole Jawyer ship, its hilarious and oh so cute! 
Jack - "Don't you want my phone number?"
 I can't stop laughing!
Oh my gosh! When Jacks dad ends the relationship between them, its so sad!
This vid is amazing, I love it The audio is great, watcha talking about:P[/b]
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Hahhaha that was funny....
"Hey there sunshine" is hularious!!!!
Good job!
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| haha that was brilliant, loved it all i don't see where the audio screwed up i thought it was brilliant and the beginning clips were hilarious "i guess that takes cuddling off" i laughed so hard at that |
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I LOVED it! Funny and touching at the same time.
great clipchoice !
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If there is anything I love more than Jate its Jawyer!
You told the story so well. The voiceovers worked perfectly. I loved the parts with Jack's dad.
The only thing that bothered me was that you left the words up for too short a time. I didn't really get to read anything.
Still, great vid and one worth watching over and over.
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ohh soo funny god too funny especially when he sed my marriage what did u say bout my marriage dad sooo funny very clever how u got that to all fit in perfection my socks hav been rocked too much tooday i gotta get more sox woop woop and i look forward to more of your vids in the future
well done! brilliant
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dayln03
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| IamSoLostRightNow wrote: |
The only thing that bothered me was that you left the words up for too short a time. I didn't really get to read anything.
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I know that was another thing that i couldn't get to work out right, i swear my vegas just hates me, the voices the text, it wasn't havin ANY of it!
thanks anyway
and thanks to everyone else for your loverly comments
IntoTheVoid -- oh i'm glad they sounded alright to you! that makes me smile -- see?? haha anyhoo thanks so much
FrecklesPhoenix -- thank you! brotha, tee hee, got a little desmond thing goin on there
Redhead -- thank you soo much! favorite??!! ahh im' so flattered! i'm glad you liked the bedroom/shower scenes, i was a tidge worried that those would be like too obvious, so im glad you liked them!
Kate. -- i'm glad you liked that part, i couldn't resist the, "dont you want my phone number"! thanks so much
Borislava -- thank you!, i know the 'sunshine' line just inspired me haha it so very sawyer
charmed_charlie -- thank so much charlie! the cuddling line makes me smile everytime, i just had to put it in there, it was too easy
MissCalippo -- thank you! i'm REALLY glad you got a sense that it was touching, i really wanted that to show through that these boys are really in love -- i wish lol
xJBxFROGURTxJBx -- congrats on the hundredth post
whoah, huge post much?? oh well i HAD to say thank you to all of you, i was terribly, terribly unsure about this vid -- so i appreciate all the reassurance
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Oh my life  *bows down*.. i am not worthy lol!!
That was the best Jawyer.. That ship usually make me go UGH! but that was just adorable.. so many bits i loved..
"Dont you want my phone number?"
"No, no not really"
"Guess that takes cuddling off the table"
*Laughs*
*Little smile where they realise they lorrrve eachother* hehehehe!!! Im all giggly now lol
or my personal favourite (which made me nearly wet myself)
"Am I interrupting?"
*Both turn*
"What?"
"May be ok for some people, Jack.. not for you"
Ohhh dear.. ok ill shut up now.. i think i should calm myself down with some angsty videos
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ohh my gosh thank you soo much!!
i'm soo glad you liked it
i appreciate that it was adorable, thats definately what i was trying for! i just love those boys together
jacks darn father right? always gettin in the way! lol
thanks again!
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I really liked this! I thought the scenes you constructed were very believable and the part where his dad disapproves is genius. Really awesome.
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