Lost Video Island

tjmack1986 · Expert Vidder Joined: 30 Mar 2008 Posts: 3436

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"Shawn&Juliet; I Dont Love You, But I Always Will" 05-06-2012
*SPOILERS FOR SEASON FINALE*
Fandom: Psych
Song: Poison & Wine by The Civil Wars
Vidder: tjmack1986
Length: 1:25 (46MB WMV)

Link(s): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C9arG37dBjQ
http://www.sendspace.com/file/vpr3k4

PsychoCynic · Posted: Tue May 08, 2012 9:41 pm Post subject:

Aww, this was so sweet! I loved your use of the voiceovers and the lyrical interpretation when you didn't include voiceover ("your mouth is poised" - is that the right lyric?). Your beat use was really subtle and wonderful and in line with the music.

The only thing was that I felt this ended too quickly. I saw a mini-buildup earlier and I was expecting some sort of climax, but never got one. The conversation you included at the end was very important to their relationship, but I'm not sure if I would've ended it like that.

I hope you don't take the criticism too harshly. Overall I really did like the vid! Nice job on it!

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tjmack1986 · Expert Vidder Joined: 30 Mar 2008 Posts: 3436

Thank you so much! Nope, I love criticism, it helps me get better!
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Brooke · Expert Vidder Joined: 01 Jul 2008 Posts: 24129

Great vid, I loved the coloring and the audio. I don't watch this show; but I know it's one I should

I thought the song went perfect here.

tjmack1986 · Expert Vidder Joined: 30 Mar 2008 Posts: 3436

*gasps again* brooke, you're killing me! Psych is such an awesome show. LOL!

Thanks again! <3
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eloramoon · Council Member Joined: 24 Feb 2008 Posts: 9077

So sweet, Tammy! Great job!

tjmack1986 · Expert Vidder Joined: 30 Mar 2008 Posts: 3436

Thanks Julia!
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