Joined: 27 Jul 2007 Posts: 30477 Location: With Anna Torv... somewhere ;)
Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 4:27 pm Post subject:
Spoiler:
Oh no!! Kate gets shot? You better not kill her
This was great! You had some good AU scenes in there like when Sawyer gives Kate the sunflower and the french toast scene! I loved the scenes with Sawyer and his daughter too! Can't wait to see how its going to end!! When will part two be up? _________________
Joined: 22 May 2006 Posts: 4030 Location: Albany, NY
Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 5:39 pm Post subject:
Polarbear wrote:
Casting for Sawyer and Kate's kid was spot on.
Agreed with that; good casting. Spoilers for ending:
Spoiler:
Kate getting shot is a plus in my book.
Ahem. That aside, I liked the sense of storyline that threaded through this. Sawyer punching the mirror was effectively used. Most of the lip-synchs looked on-target: "She's beautiful" was the only one that jumped out at me as being off, only because "She looks just like you when she smiles" was exactly on the mouth movements.
Minor critique: The dolly out on Sawyer's face at the kitchen table felt a bit jarring. There was no technical problem with it, so I'm not sure why it felt a bit askance (maybe because there were no other dollied shots?) but it's a small concern.
Good job. _________________ I saw a werewolf drinking a pina colada at Trader Vic's. His hair was perfect.
Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 10:47 pm Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE
I loved your use of Effy as their daughter ;D
I thought that it was a really when constructed story although a teeny bit of the lip-syncs were slightly off but it didn't detract from the piece being beautiful overall
Joined: 03 Feb 2005 Posts: 35782 Location: Sawyerville, USA
Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 6:05 am Post subject:
Great AU storyline and some really awesome manipped scenes! I loved the french toast one in particular. And yikes, what a cliffhanger! Looking forward to the next part! Good work!
Joined: 03 Jun 2006 Posts: 18232 Location: Somewhere...
Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 7:53 pm Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE
Wow a very awesome job I loved the casting of their daughter being Effy from skins
The song was very cool, it worked really well for the video
Awww I loved the proposal scene, and wow the ending what a way to leave it lol.
Great job, and good luck in the contest
Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 55699 Location: the nest
Posted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 6:35 am Post subject:
gorgeous colouring Emma!!! Just beautiful great story too!! kate coming through with her promise about Clementine; excellent never realized how much Effy really looks a lot like Cassidy:) chilling ending as well my only question is, what happened to Cassidy? Is Kate raising Clementine, or was she just telling Sawyer where/who she was now? Or is Clementine meant to be sawyer and kate's daughter? cannot wait for part 2!! _________________
Joined: 02 Mar 2008 Posts: 15576 Location: Wigan, England
Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 10:31 am Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE
Ooh brilliant vid!!! I loved the storyline and how you used Effy as Clementine, the scenes between her and Sawyer were really nicely done!! Wonderful job, I really enjoyed it and can't wait to see the next part!
Joined: 28 Jun 2005 Posts: 4708 Location: Philadelphia, Pa
Posted: Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:29 am Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE
Gorgeous vid, and great job with casting Effy, I loved that you used her! Beautiful editing, i loved the coloring. Your manips were wonderful, i really loved watching this!
Joined: 12 Aug 2007 Posts: 4917 Location: Pennsylvania, USA
Posted: Sun Apr 11, 2010 2:24 pm Post subject: Meant to be alone sawyer and kate AU part 1 by EMMALOUISE
Wooah, this was excellent!!!!!! I loved the song choice, very gorgeous! Your use of Effy as Sawyer's daughter was soo great, (Skins is my second favorite show next to Lost, so Skins and Lost=Epic ) I really loved the coloring and editing in this video, it looked really elegant and lovely. I liked your use of the sideways clips of Sawyer coming to the door with the flower to Kate!! The ending was absolutely WOW, can't wait to see the next video of this, it'll be so brilliant! Good luck in the contest!
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And yikes, what a cliffhanger! 
Looking forward to the next part! Good work! 
