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Belle MacFarlane Expert Vidder
Joined: 02 Sep 2009 Posts: 7771 Location: McKinley High choir room. Sometimes Hogwarts.
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ciaimpala Expert Vidder
Joined: 25 Nov 2008 Posts: 11823 Location: 221B Baker Street
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Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 8:46 pm Post subject: Youre My Wonderwall :: Kaire AU by Belle MacFarlane |
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This was really sweet and wonderful! I think its one of your best |
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nikkimonique Expert Vidder
Joined: 27 Jul 2007 Posts: 30477 Location: With Anna Torv... somewhere ;)
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 3:21 am Post subject: |
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I really enjoyed this. I loved the slow motion . It Went really well with the mood of the song and it gave me a happy and peaceful feeling. good luck in the contest. _________________
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thefilmchick Expert Vidder
Joined: 22 May 2006 Posts: 4030 Location: Albany, NY
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Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 8:48 pm Post subject: |
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I like the mood you established throughout much of the video--shots were clear and intentional, and you had progress through the narrative. The ending felt a bit abrupt, and I think you could have stretched it out a little longer.
The Lady Gaga intro was good, but going from that to 'Wonderwall' was a bit odd--I was expecting a faster-paced video. "Teeth teeth teeth" could use a little more beat emphasis, also (as opposed to the same effect), since it builds to that line.
Technical notes:
Credit clip "Directed by Paul Edwards" around 0:40.
The switch from Kate to Claire at 1:50 felt a bit jumpy and too fast-paced for the slo-mo footage it was around.
Claire's voiceover at 2:15 was garbled; I think that's her fault and not yours, though, so won't dock you for it.
Interesting work, though! _________________ I saw a werewolf drinking a pina colada at Trader Vic's. His hair was perfect.
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Aislynn Council Member
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 5:07 am Post subject: |
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Aw, that was really sweet! This version of the song really worked well for the story, IMO! I enjoyed it! |
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Charmed_Charlee Expert Vidder
Joined: 03 Jun 2006 Posts: 18232 Location: Somewhere...
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 7:26 pm Post subject: Youre My Wonderwall :: Kaire AU by Belle MacFarlane |
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Oooh I've never heard this version of Wonderwall but I must say it's very cool
I liked the beginning with Catch a Falling Star, I always find when Claire did that quite eery lol.
Your vid was very cute and sweet
Great job and good luck in the contest |
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eloramoon Council Member
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Posted: Wed Apr 07, 2010 2:29 am Post subject: Youre My Wonderwall :: Kaire AU by Belle MacFarlane |
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Aww, that was very sweet! Good luck in the contest! |
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littleton_pace Council Member
Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 55699 Location: the nest
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oooh; i really liked the merge from Emilie singing into Duffy's song; very nice. I thought the story could have used more depth to it. One minute they're in hospital; then living together I assume, but I didn't really feel their relationship grow. I really loved the mood you created though especially at the end with the slow motion clips Good job hun! _________________
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Uruviel Council Member
Joined: 31 Mar 2005 Posts: 21848 Location: Tennessee
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Posted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 7:10 am Post subject: Youre My Wonderwall :: Kaire AU by Belle MacFarlane |
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Very sweet vid, nice work. |
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emmasholi Council Member
Joined: 02 Mar 2008 Posts: 15576 Location: Wigan, England
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Posted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 9:59 am Post subject: Youre My Wonderwall :: Kaire AU by Belle MacFarlane |
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Such a lovely vid Millie! I thought your song choice was really interesting but I loved it, the whole slow-mo, peaceful feel to this vid was so nice! It just seemed so fitting with the storyline Wonderful job, I really enjoyed watching! |
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Lostwithoutdom Expert Vidder
Joined: 28 Jun 2005 Posts: 4708 Location: Philadelphia, Pa
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Posted: Sun Apr 11, 2010 4:58 am Post subject: Youre My Wonderwall :: Kaire AU by Belle MacFarlane |
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aww this was very cute! I loved this version of wonderwall, it fit so well with the story. Nice job! |
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Jinlovessunxx Expert Vidder
Joined: 12 Aug 2007 Posts: 4917 Location: Pennsylvania, USA
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Posted: Sun Apr 11, 2010 1:43 pm Post subject: Youre My Wonderwall :: Kaire AU by Belle MacFarlane |
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Aw, so wonderful and sweet I really loved this song, wow, never heard this version before! I loved how it was slow but really beautiful and meaningful for your story! You used all the perfect Kaire clip choices and everything just flowed together serenely with them two together and raising Aaron, just lovely! The ending clip was so cute too, with Claire touching Kate's shoulder, loved that to bits! Good luck in the contest! |
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