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dl15 Intermediate Vidder
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blackwolf1480 Intermediate Vidder
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 3:15 am Post subject: We Are (AU) by dl15 |
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I loved how the flash of the bomb matched that perticular song part Good luck in the contest |
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dl15 Intermediate Vidder
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 3:37 am Post subject: |
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Thanks Please keep in mind it's my first ever AU video |
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xXAngelicEvilXx Guest
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:50 am Post subject: We Are (AU) by dl15 |
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Good job! The clips were a little long, but you matched things like the bomb dropping and the house blowing up to the beat, so it was still a great job! Great ideas and good luck! |
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Uruviel Council Member
Joined: 31 Mar 2005 Posts: 21848 Location: Tennessee
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Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 5:48 am Post subject: We Are (AU) by dl15 |
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Nice vid, the part where the bomb dropped was very well-done. |
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littleton_pace Council Member
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Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 11:42 am Post subject: |
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oooh; i love this song always works well for these kind of vids
i would suggest cutting down on clips in the future, like the opening scene went on without editing, as in just as it played in the show, for almost a whole minute. that's really too long.
I did like the connections you made with with Jack and Locke and Jack and sawyer. But some of them felt unfinished. Like why did Sawyer go to see Jack? and why did Kate shoot Sawyer? and i wasn't sure what had happened at the end.
Very good first AU :] For the future; keep in mind the story of them and how the finer details play out because that adds to the vid on a whole _________________
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Lostwithoutdom Expert Vidder
Joined: 28 Jun 2005 Posts: 4708 Location: Philadelphia, Pa
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Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 6:57 pm Post subject: We Are (AU) by dl15 |
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Very nice for your first AU! |
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Jinlovessunxx Expert Vidder
Joined: 12 Aug 2007 Posts: 4917 Location: Pennsylvania, USA
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Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 2:36 am Post subject: We Are (AU) by dl15 |
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Ooh, very good job for your first AU vid! The song was great, and totally perfect for the Losties and their stories! Great beginning with the bomb dropping, and really great clip choices throughout the vid! Good luck in the contest! |
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eloramoon Council Member
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Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 6:10 pm Post subject: We Are (AU) by dl15 |
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Nice job! |
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Aislynn Council Member
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Posted: Sat Aug 08, 2009 2:48 am Post subject: |
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Nice job for your first AU! I love the song, it really works great for the Losties! ♥! |
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Charmed_Charlee Expert Vidder
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Posted: Sat Aug 08, 2009 8:09 pm Post subject: We Are (AU) by dl15 |
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Oooh yay I love this song
My only crit is that a few scenes ran a tad too long, but twas a great video
Good first au
Did Sawyer go into Jack's house? I was a little confused with it jumping to sun.
But great job and good luck in the contest |
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dl15 Intermediate Vidder
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 2:33 am Post subject: Re: We Are (AU) by dl15 |
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1390 wrote: | Oooh yay I love this song
My only crit is that a few scenes ran a tad too long, but twas a great video
Good first au
Did Sawyer go into Jack's house? I was a little confused with it jumping to sun.
But great job and good luck in the contest |
That was what I meant to show, yes. tbh even I'm a tad confused about what happened
edit: oh, and thanks for the lovely comments, everyone! |
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