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Fan4Lost Advanced Vidder
Joined: 12 Jan 2006 Posts: 2224
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Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 12:15 am Post subject: Steph's Stuff |
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I've been inspired lately to write some little pieces, so I just wanted to share them with you as I write them. Nothing special, just some crap.
"Love is" by Stephanie - Prose I think, or just ramblings.
Love is a feeling that no one really understands.
Something that we only wish we could control.
It makes you question yourself,
It makes you wonder why you're even alive.
It can make you cry, it can make you feel weak,
Or it can tear you apart to the point of no return.
Love can make you lose your sanity
It can make you see yourself for who you really are.
When a single touch can expose every secret inside of you.
It can bring about happiness and it can bring about pain.
It grasps you so tightly that you can be lost forever.
And just when you let it in, it can destroy you in a single second.
Love is when you can see the whole world in someone's eyes.
It's when you desire so much, all defenses rendered useless.
It is cruel yet kind, passionate yet cold,
It is given and stolen, battered and soothed.
Love is the tides of life washing through us,
That delightful addiction seeping through our veins.
Love can take a person beyond redemption.
It can sweetly devastate the peaceful balance of life.
It can frighten, holding you so tightly you are afraid to breathe.
It will take you to a place where nothing can harm you.
It plays games, tempting and seductive.
Love can kill a part of us inside.
If love is so dangerous, then why do we keep falling in love?
And why are we so threatened by it?
Does it mean that our world is complete?
Will it make us better people?
Love can be accepted or rejected but it will always be there.
And until the end of time, it will forever rule us.
(Wow, where did that come from...LOL) |
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cows23 Novice Vidder
Joined: 28 Jan 2006 Posts: 114 Location: my house
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Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 12:19 am Post subject: |
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I don't think that's crap! I think it's really good! Don't be so hard on yourself!
Great job, Steph. |
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fallen_angel Advanced Vidder
Joined: 20 Feb 2005 Posts: 4376 Location: Australia
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Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 10:53 am Post subject: |
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wow!!! that was really nice steph
hope to see more from you |
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PsychoCynic Expert Vidder
Joined: 18 Jul 2005 Posts: 1795 Location: United States
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Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 10:57 am Post subject: |
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That was so good!
Beautiful, too! _________________
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Fan4Lost Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 5:15 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks guys |
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Spiral Static Intermediate Vidder
Joined: 02 Apr 2006 Posts: 404
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Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 5:19 pm Post subject: |
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Woah! That was really beautiful!! |
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