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[MovieGuy]

lol good name

[fallen_angel]

[Harry]

okay sorry for such a long wait for the next ep but yeah...
exams are all done now and I'm back to school. AP is up so dont have to worry bout that too much. All i have now is just my drivers test coming up soon and thats it...
so expect Paul and the Wonka Factor up soon

[ebizmybef74]

Yay!! And one slight request: Can you kind of tone down the sluttiness with my character?
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[Tom Co.]

[MovieGuy]

I think it's beyond sluttiness now. It is now called Liz

[fallen_angel]

[ebizmybef74]

[Tom Co.]

OH YES!

[Harry]

okay the wait is almost over
ive just started writing page 5 and hoping to be done before the lost episode airs.... hopefully...
this is turning out to be a great ep i think, lots of stuff happening, one of my favs ive written.
About the ep... My character leaves this episode and has a very small part. Paul has to deal with his 'Wonka Factor'. Aislynn has a very small part also in this episode, but will return unlike Harry. Don't wanna give away too much info since the ep should be up in the next hour or so....
Some more news, episode 10 is going to be called Hiatus, might change though. I think Tom might be co-writing the ep with me this weekend and it should be good. Episode name may change before airing once again, that name just kinda popped in my head cuz of what I have planned for the next ep.

[Polarbear]

Do I get it on with Holly? sounds good
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[Harry]

i just wrote a sad part..... very sad

[Harry]

okay im finished... just about to post....

very very good ep, IMO ...

[Harry]

LVI : Secrets

Episode Nine: Paul and the Wonka Factor
Starring – Nate, Paul, Vicky, Liz, Colin, Holly, Tom, Marcus, Jaime and Shelly
Guest Starring – Harry, Aislynn, Ashley and Kevin

Written By – Harry

Holly sat on a couch at her place, watching Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory. She was being gently hugged by arms, Paul’s.
“Don’t you just love this movie,” Holly asked, laughing as the kid fell into the chocolate lake.
“Yes!” Paul said excitingly. “The kids fate”.
“Paul,” she said, hitting him.
“Watch the balls”.
RING RING RING
Paul picked up the phone. “Yellow?”
“Paul!” someone yelled at him.
“Whoa,” Paul said as he pulled the phone away from his ear. “What ya want?”
“Damn it PAUL!” Nate yelled. “I need you out of my apartment now!”
“Why?!” Paul asked. “What the hell did I do?”
“You know damn well what you did. You’re with Holly! That’s what”.
“Hey, you’re the asshole who was caught!” Paul yelled back. Holly sat up and put the movie on pause.
“What’s going on?” she whispered. Paul put up his finger, telling her one minute.
“Yeah, well. I thought we were friends. You can get your ass out of my apartment today. Get you damn things out of here!” Nate yelled. Paul hung up the phone.
“What was that about?” Holly asked.
Paul looked at her, then held her hands in his. “Can I move in with you?”

Secrets

“So you’re leaving again?” Shelly asked as she sit on Harry’s bed.
Harry stuffed some clothes into his gym bag and looked up at Shelly.
“Why you gonna miss me?” he grinned. Shelly smiled and blushed a bit.
“Well yeah, of course I will”.
Harry moved over to the bed and sat down beside Shelly.
“I’m going to miss you too Shells but I can’t stay here. I mean,” he started. Shelly didn’t understand why he wouldn’t stay for her. “I can’t. There’s to much crap going on here”.
“But,” Shelly said.
“But what? Are you planning on getting with me? Shelly, not to be rude but,” he said. “I’m not interested anymore. I just want to be friends. Is that okay?”
Shelly almost broke down in tears. “Why? I thought I was what you wanted?”
“You were”.
“So what? Is Liz what you want now?” Shelly now getting mad. “I didn’t mean to hurt you”.
“I’ve been away for like four weeks and you expect that we could just get together?”
Shelly fell silent. “Have a nice time in Hollywood”. She got up and walked out of the house. Harry watched her through the window, she wiped her tears from her face and walked down the street.

Colin sat the diner, waiting for Aislynn to come to work.
“Colin,” a man said from behind him. Colin turned around and saw that it was Michael, one of the cooks.
“Oh hey Mike,” Colin said as he got up from his seat and walked over to where Michael was standing. “What’s up?”
“Not much, just need to tell you that Ais called,” he said.
“Oh yeah?”
“Yeah, she said she’s not coming to work today and told me to tell you”.
“Oh thanks,” Colin nodded. “Is she ok?”
“Oh yeah, fine. I guess her grandma is in the hospital out of town and she went to see her. She should be back in a week she said”. Mike picked up a couple plates off of an empty table.
“Oh, well that’s too bad,” Colin said. “If she calls again, can you ask her to call me?”
“Sure thing”. Mike took the plates into the kitchen.
Colin grabbed his things from the table he was sitting at earlier and left Mandy’s.

“Thanks Mike, that kid really needs to get a clue,” Aislynn said as Mike came into the kitchen.
“Anything for my Ais,” he smiled and placed the dishes into the sink.

Paul banged on the door of his old apartment. Nate came to the door wearing only his boxers.
“Yeah?”
“What the hell is your problem man?” Paul said, pushing Nate to the side and entering the house. “I mean, what is everyone’s problem? There’s nothing going on with me and Holly!”
“You sure? ‘Cause it sure did look like something was going on with you two on Christmas”.
“Just shut the hell up and let me get my things,” Paul shouted as he went into his bedroom.
“Fine, fine,” Nate said. “But tell me this. Why haven’t you tried to get back with Jaime?”
Paul paused with his ‘Angel’ action figure in his left hand and Clark Kent in the other.
“You like her don’t you?” Paul didn’t say anything. “That’s what I thought”.

“You’re moms hot,” Tom said as he sat in Marcus’ room on the computer.
“What?!” Marcus sat up, disgusted.
“Well she is. I mean,” he started. “I saw her tight butt earlier, yummy”. Tom winked and Marcus almost barfed. “Yo, I’m just kidding,” Tom laughed.
“You’re a freak you know that?”
“Ya, I get told at least once a day”.
Marcus laid back down onto his bed and closed his eyes. “I wonder what Shelly’s doing right now”.
“Probably standing in your doorway thinking that you’re a freak and you miss her,” Tom said and got up. Marcus opened his eyes and looked at the door. Shelly stood there, looking stunning. “You think he’s a freak don’t you?” Tom said as he walked out the door, leaving the two alone.
“Hi,” Marcus said.

Vicky sat in her house, watching TV when the phone rang. “
“Hello?” she answered.
“Hey Vicky,” Jaime said on the other line.
“Oh hey hunn,” Vicky said, turning down the volume of the TV. “What’s going on?”
“Oh nothing, just wanted to talk,” she said. “And was wondering if you could give me some advice?”
Vicky then put the TV on mute, “Sure thing babe”.
“Well it’s about me and Paul. He hasn’t even tried to explain himself even thought I know he was only kissing Holly because of the mistletoe,” she explained.
Vicky listened to her and thought for a second. “Maybe he’s waiting for you?”
“But if he really wanted to get back together, wouldn’t he have called?”
“Well maybe he just needs a break,” Vicky replied. “He could be thinking the same thing about you.”
Jaime thought. He could? “Thanks Vicky”.
“No problem sweetie,” she said. “Glad I could be of service”.

Paul knocked on Holly’s door and she answered. She must’ve just gotten out of the shower because she had a bath robe on and her hair was wet.
“Hey there Pauly,” she said and smiled. Paul walked in and closed the door.
“What he say then?”
“He’s really pissing me off Holly,” he said as he walked over to the fridge and grabbed a can of soda. “He’s kicking me out because he’s jealous of me and you. There’s not even a me and you, is there? I’m really confused”.
Holly stood there, almost naked in front of Paul and bit her lower lip. She shrugged.

Liz and Kevin walked in a wooded area, holding hand-in-hand.
“Are you going back to Hollywood with Harry?” she asked him as they slowly walked down the dirt path.
He looked and her and replied, “I don’t know yet. Is this just a fling with me and you or in another month are you going to dump me and get with someone else as soon as you’re bored with me?”
Liz felt offended by that and let go of his hand. “You think I’m a slut?”
“No, of course not,” Kevin said. “It’s just that after seeing you’re friends at Christmas, it seems like everyone has a different boyfriend or girlfriend every week”.
Liz laughed, “Yeah, it’s weird like that but how long have you and me been together now?”
“Like six weeks now. Why?”
“Well honestly, this is one of my longer relationships,” she smiled. “Are you proud?”
He laughed and reached for her hand, “Yeah, I think I am”.

“Hi,” Marcus said and he sat up.
“Hi,” Shelly said shyly. “How are you?”
“Come in,” he said and cleared a spot for her on the bed. She walked over and sat down.
“Look,” she said. “I’m sorry for what happened at the Christmas party”. Marcus looked at her, looked out the window and then stood up.
“Shelly,” he paused. “I, I don’t know what to say right now”.
Shelly stayed quiet, watching his every move.
“I don’t know if I want to get back together”.
Pause. Absolute silence.

Holly was fully dressed now and sat in the living room with Paul. An awkward silence fell upon them after he asked if there was anything between them.
“So,” he said.

Tom ended up walking over to Mandy’s to see who was all there, and to his surprise, only Ashley sit at the table.
“Hey,” he said as he walked into the restaurant.
She smiled and waved. “What’s up?”
“Not much, just uh,” he said and saw what she was wearing. She sat there in a baby blue bikini. He didn’t think it was that hot out. “Uh, I was over at Marcus’ house when Liz came over”. He couldn’t help himself from looking at her chest. He is a guy, what do you expect?
She laughed, “So are they patching things up then?” Tom sat down at the table and placed his hands on top of it, trying hard not to look below her neck.
“Erm,” he said. “I guess”.
“I guess they’re kinda big Tomas”.
“What?!” he said shocked.
“I said I guess they’re he’s not that big of an ass”. She looked confused.
“I guess not”.
Aislynn brought a plate of fries for Ashley and set them on the table.
Tom watched Ashley’s breasts as she leaned forward to grab some.
“Wanna suck them?” Ashley asked.
“WHAT?!” Tom shouted.
“Do want some?”
“Uh, no thanks”. He tried to get his mind off of her for a second. He thought about Lost. “Man that Hurley is funny,” he thought to himself.
“Are you okay?”
“What I wouldn’t do to meet Evie,” he thought.
“Tom?”
“Oh and that Maggie, wow!”
“What?” Tom said the last thought out loud.
“I’m sorry, I gotta be somewhere,” he said as he got up and walked out the door.
“Okay?”

“So,” Pauly said as he stood in front of Holly. She moved into the room and sat down on the couch.
“I think we need to talk Paul,” she said as she patted the cushion. He looked at her, nodded, then sat down beside her. “What’s going on between us?”
They sat there, seriously thinking about what should they say next.
“Holly,” he stammered. “I really like you”.
“But?”
“But I still have feelings for Jaime. She’s just,” he said. “She’s my first time,” he admitted. Shock fell upon Holly. She was speechless. “Pretty shocking huh?”
“Uh, yeah,” she smiled. “But that’s okay Paul. Why should I care?”
He looked at her. “Because I might suck in bed?”
She laughed and hugged him. “I don’t care. I like you to Paul,” she blushed. “We just need to figure out where we’re at.”

Liz snuggled next to Kevin, watching TV in her bedroom.
“Kev?” she said.
“Yeah?”
“Do you love me?”
“What kind of question is that? Of course I love you”. He looked at her and kissed her but she backed away.
“I mean are you really in love with me or am I just the girl that’s putting out?”
“Am I forcing you to put out?”
“Well no, but it just seems that every time we’re around each other, we’re doing something sexual,” Liz said as she sat up now on her bed. “Do you think we’ll be together when we’re older?”
“Liz,” he said as he held her hand now. “You’re the one I want to be with. I want,” he paused. “I want to have children with you someday”.
Liz sat there, she couldn’t believe what she had just heard. Kids?!
She smiled, and looked at the tv. Kids?


Shelly looked at Marcus. Not get back together?
“Marcus,” she almost cried.
He stared at her.
“Marcus!”
“I think you should leave Shells,” he said as he got up. Shelly looked at him in disbelief. “I’m sorry”. He closed the door and walked back to his bed.
Shelly stood on the other side of the door sobbing. She turned towards the hall and started walking. She felt as if no one loved her. She wanted to get away.

Jaime picked up the phone and dialed Paul’s number. She listened patiently, waiting for someone to pick up.
“Hello,” someone answered.
“Hey Nate, is Paul there?” she asked.
“No, he doesn’t live here anymore, you can try Holly’s house. I think that bastard is over there with that slut”.
“Oh,” she said silently. “Uh, thanks Nate”. She hung up the phone and started to cry. He was over at Holly’s house, those two, alone.

Nate hung up the phone when there was a knock at the door, and to his surprise it was Vicky doing the knocking.
“Hey sexy,” she said as she walked into the apartment.
Nate watched as she walked by, shaking her ass as she walked towards the living room. “What are you doing here?”
She sat down on the couch and looked at him. “I’ve come to see you,” she said. “I thought we could hang”.
“Uh, sure”. Nate walked into the kitchen and got a couple beers from the fridge. “Here,” he said as he handed her the can. He sat down next to her and turned on the television. “What ya in the mood for?”
“How about some fun?” she said as she rolled on top of his legs, her butt sitting on his lap. “How’s this?”
“Erm, Vick?” he said uncomfortably. “I don’t think we should be doing this. I mean, I just got out of a relationship”.
“Like you care? She’s doing Paul now anyways. So common’,” she insisted. “Have some fun”. She ripped off her shirt and brought it over her head, revealing her black bra. Nate’s eyes popped out of his head as he watched her do this. “Wanna feel?”

Shelly closed her eyes and started to cry. She had been walking around town for about an hour now and was walking right in the middle of the street. She had no idea what she was doing, or where she was going. She fell down to her knees. Tears slowly ran down her cheek The pavement was hard as she slammed her fists into the ground. Her knuckles started to bleed as she did this five times.
She brought her hands to her face, her warm, red blood smearing across her face as she wiped away the tears. Shelly screamed out loud. Crying, and now punching the road again.
A car came around the corner, the driver looked in his twenties, and music booming from the speakers he had in his car. The man shook his head, rocking it around with his music. Shelly looked up, seeing the car coming and froze. It was now coming very close and very fast. A tear rolled down her face once again.
“Shelly!” Harry yelled, coming out of his house and seeing the car coming. He dropped his bags and dashed towards her. “Get out of the way!” he screamed to her.

Holly sat with Paul on the couch, he looked at her and his eyes gleamed.
“What?” she said, blushing.
“Nothing,” he said and looked away smiling, his cheeks too turning a pinkish colour.
“Paul?” Holly said.
“Yeah?” he faced her again.
“Will you kiss me?”
Paul looked at her, she was the most beautiful girl he had ever seen. He leaned over her, slowly and gently kissed her. His body was now on top of hers and their lips mashed against each others.
Paul’s hands started to wonder up her stomach and up her shirt. Holly sat up a bit just enough for him to pull it over her. Holly reached down by her waist and unbuttoned his pants and undid hers. They both slipped their clothes off and still kissing each other eagerly, tongues swimming around in their mouths.
They both stopped and took a breath.
“I thought you wanted to figure where we were at?” Paul asked, breathing heavily.
“I know,” she said, taking in deep breaths. “I just,” breath. “Need”. Breath. “You!” She got on top of him and kissed him again, now undoing her bra and rubbed against his bear chest.

“Shelly!” Harry yelled, coming out of his house and seeing the car coming. He dropped his bags and dashed towards her. “Get out of the way!” he screamed to her. Harry ran onto the streets and pushed her out of the way just in time before the car hit her. He wasn’t fast enough to get himself out of the way though. His body smashed into the front of the car, hitting him like a brick wall. His body flew ten feet away from where had gotten hit, blood everywhere.
His body lay there, lifeless on the cement. Shelly screamed at the top of her lungs, seeing Harry’s dead, bloody body on the road.
The car driver got out of his car, in tears as he saw the boy’s body. Shelly had tears running down her face, still screaming.
“Oh my god!” the man kept repeating. “Oh my god”.
“HARRY!” Shelly screamed. “HARRY!!!”

[Harry]

please post and tell me what you really think .... i think this is my fav ep yet! i really liked writing this one, yet it took so long to write. I didn't plan on the ending, it just sort of happened.... but i think it was a good idea as i wrote it ... ya so just post some honest comments