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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
Joined: 09 May 2005 Posts: 9022
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2005 1:26 am Post subject: "Lifeless" Episode Two - Fan Fic |
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Okay, make sure to read Episode One: Starboard before this one.
Chapter One
Jack and Hurley quickly carried Sawyer into the cave and lied him down on the seat Boone had died on. "Dude, I think he's dead."
"He's not dead."
"But he looks really--"
"His breathing is shallow. It's hard to tell but he's still alive."
"Oh. Is he gonna be okay?"
"I'm not sure."
Jin was helping Michael into the caves.Sayid ran up to them. "What happened?"
"We were attacked 15 miles out."
"By who?"
"I think the others."
"What? But I thought they aren't rea--"
"You gotta find him."
"Excuse me?"
"Walt.You gotta find him for me."
"Do you have any idea where they are?"
"The smoke for one thing."
"I just can't go out--"
"Get a search party and find him."
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Charlie, Nathan and Kate were walking back to the caves. Nathan walked up next to Kate."So, are you seeing anyone?"
"Charlie."
"You're seeng Charlie?"
"Charlie, can you please et this guy away from me?"
"Yes, I can." Charlie walked up and grabbed Nathan's arm and started to take him back to the others with the hatch.
Kate continued to walk along. It was now about 7:30 in the morning and she had had a long sleepless night. She heard something rustling in the bushes. She turned and looked at the massive bush next to her. She could hear breathing.
She slowly walked toward the bush. Something was in there.
Feel free to discuss who you think will die. It might help me decide. |
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Harry
Joined: 27 Mar 2005 Posts: 1641
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2005 2:04 am Post subject: |
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Hey Movieguy... Just read all if ep 1 and wat has been posted of ep 2... ur doin a great job and keep it up Cant wait for the next part |
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Hobbes Council Member
Joined: 28 Jan 2005 Posts: 11208 Location: Vancouver, BC
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2005 3:29 am Post subject: |
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write the entire season dude! That was great. LOL Nate you horn dog |
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Harry
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2005 4:06 am Post subject: |
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Hobbes wrote: | Nate you horn dog |
LMAO... He is isnt he |
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lostzilla Expert Vidder
Joined: 14 Mar 2005 Posts: 7246 Location: Gallactica
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2005 4:17 am Post subject: |
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Quote: | Charlie, Nathan and Kate were walking back to the caves. Nathan walked up next to Kate."So, are you seeing anyone?" |
LMAO, that's so me man
More Nathan!!! LOL great work Movieguy. So when are you going to write the tail section survivors in? Maybe Nathan and Anna hook up? LOL _________________
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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2005 4:43 am Post subject: |
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I was thinking that Nathan, Anna AND Kate were going to hook up
The tail people will show up sooner or later |
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lostzilla Expert Vidder
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2005 4:52 am Post subject: |
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Quote: | I was thinking that Nathan, Anna AND Kate were going to hook up |
You're teasing me. LOL Get to work already! _________________
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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2005 8:03 am Post subject: |
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Okay, chapter two will be up tomorrow. |
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lostzilla Expert Vidder
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2005 8:32 am Post subject: |
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There better be some Nathan action, Movieguy LOL
Looking forward to the next chapter. Oh and Kate'd better not die, or all hell's gonna break lose. _________________
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SuperKC Expert Vidder
Joined: 24 Feb 2005 Posts: 3667 Location: On a Stick
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2005 1:23 pm Post subject: |
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As long as we're discussing who we think is going to die, I think it'll be Charlie.
I know he's not really in any mortal danger right now, though I did get quite excited when he fell down that hole. |
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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 3:16 am Post subject: |
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I'm sorry it's taking so long for chapter two but I'm stuck with Claire's flashaback. |
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ebizmybef74 Intermediate Vidder
Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Posts: 2641
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 3:44 am Post subject: |
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MovieGuy: I LOVE this fic! Good Job
And if Charlie dies I WILL STOP READING IT!
although I probably still will read it
ETA: I love how you made it seem like an actual episode! It is really helping my withdrawal. It seems so real! I'll probably be watching the premiere for Season 2 and be thinking that Claire caught Charlie with the drugs and that there is a horny creep called Nathan on the Island. _________________
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Aislynn Council Member
Joined: 03 Feb 2005 Posts: 35782 Location: Sawyerville, USA
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 6:25 am Post subject: Re: "Lifeless" Episode Two - Fan Fic |
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MovieGuy wrote: | "Dude, I think he's dead."
"He's not dead."
"But he looks really--"
"His breathing is shallow. It's hard to tell but he's still alive." |
See, he's NOT DEAD!!! *more happy dancing*
And hey, if 'zilla/Nathan gets all that action, then I'll feel sooooo cheated if we don't see a previously unknown survivor named Aislynn get some serious moves on with Sawyer. Make it a dream sequence! A hallucination! It doesn't matter to me, MovieGuy! Just make this poor Raving Sawyerette's meager dreams come true, woncha???
~Aislynn |
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MovieGuy Advanced Vidder
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 6:49 am Post subject: Re: "Lifeless" Episode Two - Fan Fic |
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Aislynn wrote: | And hey, if 'zilla/Nathan gets all that action, then I'll feel sooooo cheated if we don't see a previously unknown survivor named Aislynn get some serious moves on with Sawyer. Make it a dream sequence! A hallucination! It doesn't matter to me, MovieGuy! Just make this poor Raving Sawyerette's meager dreams come true, woncha???
~Aislynn |
Don't have to worry about Nathan getting any action.
Also, I knew the whole time that I was writing Starboard that Sawyer was alive. As for the next person, they're gonna be really dad.
HINTS: Kate, Shannon, Claire, Sun and Jack are not in any danger of being killed. |
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Hobbes Council Member
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 7:29 am Post subject: |
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Don't have to worry about Nathan getting any action. |
ohhhhhhh I think I may have a hint now! |
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