Lost Video Island

LVI Bot · Joined: 16 May 2005 Posts: 10110

"At the Beginning" 06-03-2006
Skate from the beginning. This is my first skate vid!
Song: At the Beginning by Donna Lewis
Vidder: charmed_charlie
Length: 3.39 (18.2MB WMV)

Link: http://www.zshare.net/video/lost-skate-wmv.html

Charmed_Charlee · Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 9:50 pm Post subject:

Hey People i was wondering whether i can have some comments on how to make my video betta and wat u think of it

leylin · Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 1:55 am Post subject:

hey!
is this ur first vid? i dont think ive seen u here before (have I?)

anyway, I loved it. I loved the begining (we were strangers starting out on a journey) and u had kate and sawyer boarding the plain. that was great. love the chorus too! actually, i loved the whole thing! lol. i love that song too! i remember it, from anastasia, right? you put it together great!!! theres nothing really to criticise about.

great job!!!

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Charmed_Charlee · Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 6:48 am Post subject:

No, I have been on this website before but neva joined so i joined yesterday and submitted my video.

Yeah it was from anastasia at the end, i love the film and i thought the music suited. Thanks for your comment i'm glad you liked it.

-charlie

rbexter93 · Expert Vidder Joined: 24 Mar 2006 Posts: 3270

downloading now, will review when I have seen it

edit: watched it and as promised here is my review.

First of all loved the song! It went nicely with the story, it was very sweet. If this is your first video I am very impressed. the bit with we were strangers was good.

Also you also asked for any improvements you can make, and after watching this is what I picked up (I'm not an expert vidder by any length but here are my 2 cents)

Some clips ran a bit too long, I was told to keep to the songs beat and never use clips over 5 seconds long, or if you want a longer clip separate
it with flashes to make it more interesting.
You used transitions well although I noticed some clips didn't have them in between, I would advise using transitions between every clip.
The final thing is I think you could have matched clips to lyrics a bit more,but I am confident you will pick this up as you go.

I have a skate video on here, and I have a skate video waiting to be put up, if you enjoy these take a look (shameless self promoting) And keep going, it was such a good video, many were just minor mistakes, never loose confidence.

-Bex
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